As the title suggests I am looking for a beta reader. I need someone to help me work on my newest story "The Scars of War", which is loosely, somewhat, not really based on the Movie "Brothers". It's a decent movie, and I recommend you watch it, if only to get an idea for what I am writing about. I am in need of help with a couple of things. Length is a big thing for me, if I feel the story isn't long enough I haven't worked enough on it. Plot structure and other plot related stuff, since although I can craft a decent story, I sometimes get sidetracked with ideas that jump into my brain in the middle of writing. And finally, grammar. This may not be a problem, but I like err on the side of caution when it comes to grammar.

Anyway, if this beta read thing, works out I may bounce some ideas off of you.

P.S. I will be posting my stories on here when I get the chance, if anyone has any suggestions on how to make them better, or move on with them plot wise tell me. Otherwise they remain one-shots.

EDIT: If you wish to try out as a beta reader, message me at my yahoo account which is seneschall[at]ymail.com and thanks in advance!