o after some much need advice from an already established member of the review community i am endevouring to do a near complete rewrite of Chroma Slips Headcannon

So here are the issues i was made aware of with my orginal backstory

1:Avoid Cannon Characters as much as possible
2:Avoid Cliche and Dangeorus locations such as the everfree forest
3:try to tone down the character a little to be just a tiny bit more believable

So without furhter ado lets do my rewrite

Chroma Slip was a member of Princess lunas night guard (and therfore a batpony) who after leaving the night guard for (still unspecified) reasons traveled until settling down on the outskirts of ponyville. Facing isolation and not receiving an incredibly good reception due to Being a batpony he soon settled into a hermatic lifestyle pouring himself into research of many things taking an special shining to Alchemy and Transmutation. He poured himself into his new passion and made such bounds and strides in his new chossen field that he even aquired his cutie mark ((a potion turning lead into a multi colored crystaline version of itself)) wellllllll one day he got abit shall we say overconfident despite having never attempted transmutation with a living being before and against all warnings in his books not to attempt it he attempted to use an alchemical potion on himself that was supposed to transmute him from his batpony self to a Pegasus pony in hopes he would receive a better reception in town..... well. ... It .... flopped. ... bad. ...he didnt succed in transmuting himself but he did succeed in changin changing his coloration from the dark night guard grayish blue to white with a few additional Markings. Seeining the state he had put himself in he delved even deeper into his studies intending to master his chosen profession no matter how long it took.

Soooo after watching the mlp review and analysis community from afar i have decided to break into it i evn mad emy own character and head cannon


Introducing!

!!!!Chroma Slip!!!!

 Chroma Slip was a member of Princess lunas night guard (and therfore a batpony) who after leaving the night guard for (still unspecified) reasons traveled until settling down in the ever Forrest where zechora found him and after discovering he had a propensity for making potions took him on as an apprentice... During the time he spent with zechora he became a very gifted potion maker and an even more gifted alchemist even so much as earning his cutie mark ((a potion turning a Rock into a multi colored version of itself)) wellllllll one day he got abit shall we say overconfident despite having never attempted alchemy with a living being before and against zechora repeated warnings that he wasn't ready he attempted to use an alchemical potion on himself that was supposed to turn him from his batpony self to a zebra like zechora though in keeping with his usual flair one with rainbow colored stripes..... well. ... It .... sorta worked. ... kinda. ...Not really. He succeed in changing his coloration from the dark night guard grayish blue to white and he succeeded in giving himself rainbow colored stripes but utterly failed in transmuting himself from bat pony to zebra. After seeing the state her student had put himself in despite her warnings zechora refused to make a potion to fix it and released him as her apprentice stating that If he could not heed her warnings he must find his own path ((working on a way to make that rhyme so it sounds like something she would actually say)) and so he set out on a journey across equestria and other lands unknown to forge his own path all the while working towards the goal of mastering his alchemy and transmutation.

So i already made a tumbler for him VVVVV

www.tumblr.com/blog/chromaslip

I also intend to make a whole new DA and FA account for him to keep him separate from my more *coughs* adult characters

Cant wait to break in now just gotta get some arts and a team an ill be on my way

LOOK MLP ANALYSIS AND REVIEW COMMUNITY HERE COMES CHROMA SLIP!!!!!!

so i ahve erecently been geeting a plethora of new characters and they will be added just as soon as i have time to write new backstories for them ^.^ thank you for all who have helped me alognt he way ^.^ LUBS

So this is something that has been bouncing around in my head for awhile now

I started when  VanchaMarl Made this Amazingly detailed and beautiful but in my opinion terrifying sketch for me http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16935043/


so what is this idea you ask?

Wellllll

by now all those who are following me are fmailiar with my sona Flora Eclair Magicaster

I want to make hir......other...side an alter ego if you will

shi would be the same character archytype and basic design but completely different coloration shi would be FAR more menacing and so Evil shi would make Lucifer himself look like a saint. a conquerer. a killer, a destroyer of species, planets GALAXIES ENTIRE UNIVERSES......in other words someone you really really wouldnt wnat to meet ina dark ally at night

i have already deecided hir name is goign to be Nyyxx

but as far as coloration and aceesories body type manerisms all that jazz i want YOUR OPINIONS

knowing what you all do of my sona what do you all Think Nyyxx should be like?

Post your ideas here then i will take the msot liked of those ideas and hold a poll as to the final design.

Look foreward to eharing everyones ideas ^.^