It's been a while!

Right now my current story is still a work in progress, any suggestions and criticism will be greatly appreciated.
http://pastebin.com/SQX5cRRg

Also a revised story has been posted at my fanfic page along with Sofurry and Inkbunny. Currently waiting on finding an artist willing to make thumbnails of my stories before I begin reposting on here again, sorry about that.

I sort of decided without mentioning it to anybody that I've decided to quit writing and remove my "works" online. They're still available on inkbunny and sofurry but they'll be removed soon as well. Sorry for the disappointment and unfulfilled requests but it's better that someone with a more respectful integrity and skill take up the mantle instead.