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I am a young writer, which probably, like everyone here, loves both writing and reading stories on various topics!
I do not limit myself to just simple reading and try to show other authors how much I appreciate their long and difficult path in creativity!
And at least let me try to prove myself as a real writer. I can't help but admit that I simply don't have enough experience and the passion for the upcoming work!
I'm constantly getting lost and I can't go on! Perhaps other young writers also face this? I have to put a dash on the work done and on the next sheet write a random passage that came to my mind that has nothing to do with the "main" work!
If among all the young writers who are currently present on the site, I would like to ask you to share your precious opinion for me about the work I have done before!
I don't need the number of views, but your criticism in the comments! You are welcome! Also support everyone to whom your words will really tell you a lot more than simple "Favorites"!
I do not limit myself to just simple reading and try to show other authors how much I appreciate their long and difficult path in creativity!
And at least let me try to prove myself as a real writer. I can't help but admit that I simply don't have enough experience and the passion for the upcoming work!
I'm constantly getting lost and I can't go on! Perhaps other young writers also face this? I have to put a dash on the work done and on the next sheet write a random passage that came to my mind that has nothing to do with the "main" work!
If among all the young writers who are currently present on the site, I would like to ask you to share your precious opinion for me about the work I have done before!
I don't need the number of views, but your criticism in the comments! You are welcome! Also support everyone to whom your words will really tell you a lot more than simple "Favorites"!
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Revenge of the hare. (G)
6 hours ago
Hello, my dear subscribers of my glorious channel. Well, I want to inform you that due to my constant workload and work on another fanfiction, I will not be able to continue writing the work that this post was dedicated to.
However, I am ready to share with you the details about the world in which the events of this fanfiction take place. As you may know and remember, the prologue itself tells the story of an anthropomorphic hare who, through her intelligence and hard work, earned a place at the most elite academy in the city, where, unfortunately, everything was rotten.
As soon as she arrived, the poor hare experienced the rottenness of the noble world firsthand. And it wasn't just a few dozen other anthropomorphic animals like her.
There are more than a thousand students at the academy, as they themselves say, of "noble birth," and therefore they consider themselves smarter than everyone else, which means they can do whatever they want.
And here, I think, a little explanation is needed. The academy itself is considered a neutral territory, where anyone who has proven the right to do so can enter, and no one: neither the authorities nor the so-called "nobility" can interfere in what is happening on its territory. At the same time, both the government and the nobility are obliged to contribute large sums to the academy's budget, as their children study within its walls.
However, the new director, who was "raised" on greed by the nobility, posed a challenge. It could be argued that both the director and the academy should remain neutral, but nothing lasts forever. The nobility managed to manipulate the director's greed, swaying him to their side.
For example, I can say that there should not be any unnecessary buildings on the academy grounds that are not related to the students' education and development, but the current director has built a villa on the academy grounds.
So, the academy was practically bursting at the seams, as Mare, the main character of this fanfiction, saw it. She was increasingly aware of the injustices taking place within the academy, and her anger and frustration grew as she witnessed the mistreatment of her and the academy by other noble students. Along the way, her list of sworn enemies and those she hated with all her heart and wanted to take revenge on only grew longer. And in the end, you know what happened: she lost her temper, but she only got expelled from the academy. According to the canon, you should know that the world around her is not so simple.
Fortunately, the heavens responded to Mare's absolute fury, as she gained a power that transcended all others. A system of random lottery skills, whose lottery wheel could be spun ten times every day. She could either receive a random skill or ten thousand primes as a consolation prize.
By the way, primes are the local currency in this world, and the amount of money the rabbit received as a consolation prize was quite impressive. And given that skills were less common than the consolation prize itself, Mare could have made a pretty decent fortune in four years.
And yes, someone in the comments wrote that how did the hare get to such heights in just four years? It's quite transparent, since time itself in this world goes against what we are used to. For example, one month does not last thirty days, but all sixty. Adhering to such logic, you can understand how long one year lasts.
But you're probably wondering what kind of world this is, aren't you? Am I right? As you can imagine, this world is quite diverse, as it contains a wide range of elements that we're used to seeing in various novels. However, I want to clarify that this is not your typical otome game. There are no ordinary humans here, and the world is inhabited by anthropomorphic animals. Moreover, the main character doesn't have anyone to support her, or someone who can encourage her and pull her out of the depths of despair with their charming words. Mare has only herself, the system granted by the heavens, and the creations she has created to fulfill her revenge. Additionally, there are no restrictions on the number of enemies. From the first chapter, it is evident how many enemies she has and how many personalities she has created to combat them.
However, I am ready to share with you the details about the world in which the events of this fanfiction take place. As you may know and remember, the prologue itself tells the story of an anthropomorphic hare who, through her intelligence and hard work, earned a place at the most elite academy in the city, where, unfortunately, everything was rotten.
As soon as she arrived, the poor hare experienced the rottenness of the noble world firsthand. And it wasn't just a few dozen other anthropomorphic animals like her.
There are more than a thousand students at the academy, as they themselves say, of "noble birth," and therefore they consider themselves smarter than everyone else, which means they can do whatever they want.
And here, I think, a little explanation is needed. The academy itself is considered a neutral territory, where anyone who has proven the right to do so can enter, and no one: neither the authorities nor the so-called "nobility" can interfere in what is happening on its territory. At the same time, both the government and the nobility are obliged to contribute large sums to the academy's budget, as their children study within its walls.
However, the new director, who was "raised" on greed by the nobility, posed a challenge. It could be argued that both the director and the academy should remain neutral, but nothing lasts forever. The nobility managed to manipulate the director's greed, swaying him to their side.
For example, I can say that there should not be any unnecessary buildings on the academy grounds that are not related to the students' education and development, but the current director has built a villa on the academy grounds.
So, the academy was practically bursting at the seams, as Mare, the main character of this fanfiction, saw it. She was increasingly aware of the injustices taking place within the academy, and her anger and frustration grew as she witnessed the mistreatment of her and the academy by other noble students. Along the way, her list of sworn enemies and those she hated with all her heart and wanted to take revenge on only grew longer. And in the end, you know what happened: she lost her temper, but she only got expelled from the academy. According to the canon, you should know that the world around her is not so simple.
Fortunately, the heavens responded to Mare's absolute fury, as she gained a power that transcended all others. A system of random lottery skills, whose lottery wheel could be spun ten times every day. She could either receive a random skill or ten thousand primes as a consolation prize.
By the way, primes are the local currency in this world, and the amount of money the rabbit received as a consolation prize was quite impressive. And given that skills were less common than the consolation prize itself, Mare could have made a pretty decent fortune in four years.
And yes, someone in the comments wrote that how did the hare get to such heights in just four years? It's quite transparent, since time itself in this world goes against what we are used to. For example, one month does not last thirty days, but all sixty. Adhering to such logic, you can understand how long one year lasts.
But you're probably wondering what kind of world this is, aren't you? Am I right? As you can imagine, this world is quite diverse, as it contains a wide range of elements that we're used to seeing in various novels. However, I want to clarify that this is not your typical otome game. There are no ordinary humans here, and the world is inhabited by anthropomorphic animals. Moreover, the main character doesn't have anyone to support her, or someone who can encourage her and pull her out of the depths of despair with their charming words. Mare has only herself, the system granted by the heavens, and the creations she has created to fulfill her revenge. Additionally, there are no restrictions on the number of enemies. From the first chapter, it is evident how many enemies she has and how many personalities she has created to combat them.
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