Some of my readers may have noticed that i,m rewriting my story Dragon lIfe. I will still have the original chapters up for now but they may be deleted later.

So why i,m dong this? Well first off, this story was written by me and another person but the other person didnt wanted his name assoiated with this so hes not mentioned as writer. It was a thing between us.

Both his and mine chapters were fine and he mostly concentrated on the vomit and poop chapters while i wrote the other ones. I did change his typo a little and tried to make so the story and writing was almost the same as mine. I,m editing out most of the vomit and poop stuff but theres stil lsome but not very much. The person who wrote those chapters are totally fine with that.

I later reread some chapters and found them to repetive. An example on the repetive: The dragons lay lots of eggs and i let the reader get in deeply and see it (with words). That is fine in the first chapters but later i let the reader read how 31 dragons lay their eggs and this was a whole chapter and the dragons lay eggs often. Theres many chapters describing this, making the reader probably bored.

Also, i,m using google translate from swedish to english and often this works but the grammar might be wrong. Sometimes i was lazy and didnt correct some grammar mistakes.

I had some chapters with very little happening and this may work with movies but not a written story.

Some chapters were edited badly when i tried to fit in so much as possible.

Also i had named an important character but not another important one.

Speaking of names, i had some famous swedish persons in the story but this will change giving the story more fantasy.

Right now i,m working and editing the written chapters and when they are ready and i,m happy with them, i upload them here. Right now i,m working on chapter 16.

Because i edit out some stuff the new rewrite will probably be shorter but more intensive. I want the action to pop from the pages.