so far the stories ive written got some positive vibes kinda concerned and scared and nervous am working on chapter 2 now as some of the early chapters will focus on Nicholas and Athrusia one of the royal guards. the 3rd storyline involving liev in the past until current time is reached in the story will be its own beast of a chapter here and there to get a better understanding of his relationship with Maria (its the only name that came to my mind.) dunno i might have to reach out to some other merfurs and mers to have some input. a friend it was like furry aquaman...kinda made me feel down as that wasn't even the intention at all. to those guessing Athrusia is connected to Maria and Nicholas by blood so a relative nic never met so thats gonna be interesting to write when those two lines intersect and connect forging a new chain if you will been hard at work thinking on where to flesh it out and grow it naturally so if someone's interested in seeing what i have so far do comment below or something feel free. i need the input.

Update chapter 2 is done so once i get the feed back the prologue and chapter 1 and 2 will be posted. 6 page chapters but this is my first time writing something like this so with that in mind im still afraid of what some are gonna think and what not. or i just might hit screw it and let nature run its course here. we will see