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this picture took forever! i think its because i went over board but that's ok. i like how it turned out. :3 commission for
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this picture took forever! i think its because i went over board but that's ok. i like how it turned out. :3 commission for

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My friend has this bike so i know quite a bit about it and i can see a few things that could be improved if you drew a bike again i'd like to give you some more information on bikes and such if you agree to me giving you some crit on it ^.^ The character is drawn beautifully though. :3
The front fender looks odd and bulged around the wheel it basically should be streamlined to the wheel because of aerodynamics and it's job to stop mud splash back, the front brake disc should be larger and thicker, there should also be two on the front of a large capacity bike unless it's a cruiser. the stand should also be way further forward near the center of the bike else it would lean awkwardly when on it's stand. the bike should also be leaning much more and angled because of lean. the dash board with all the dials shouldn't be able to be seen either ^^;
Sorry i'm going a bit anal here xD Also the rear doesn't have a sprocket for the chain. you've placed a rear brake disc which is correct but the chain is going around it. It should be on the other side of the wheel and the sprocket on the side with the chain. Sorry to throw a lot in there. But it helps ^^; As referring to the mud guard and brake discs here's what you should go for http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10014975/
Sorry i'm going a bit anal here xD Also the rear doesn't have a sprocket for the chain. you've placed a rear brake disc which is correct but the chain is going around it. It should be on the other side of the wheel and the sprocket on the side with the chain. Sorry to throw a lot in there. But it helps ^^; As referring to the mud guard and brake discs here's what you should go for http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10014975/
i appreciate the critique but its mostly for looks. also i mentioned i would love a critique on my personal art. not my commissions. this is not personal art. this is payed for art. the only description the commissioner gave me was a black ninja bike so i took that into account and looked up on Google pictures of a black ninja bike. mind you these could be different kinds of bikes. so i just grabbed whatever looks cool.
no problem! here is what i have drawn. feel free to critique this one its a train reck but it was my first one a drew lol http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8138860/
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