It's decent. Lighting is alright but the depth, color and flow of it really needs work. Plus the text placement ..

The Font type And Size Was Small Cause It Was For An Competency. I Would Like To Do It Again, Cause If I Would Put An Light Effect Down The Render The Head Wouldn´t Get Pixels XS

I said the lighting was "Okay" .. It's not bad but it could be improved.

Add more depth by allowing the focal point to stand out more, basically the girl. One way to do it is to use the "Sharpen" function and clear out whats to sharp.

You could of probably made the render bigger and give the canvas a better size. Bigger sizes are probably for more stylish and better tags then this one. I recommend using 360x100. Works best for me.