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Well, at least now i know why my college art class grades were so poor.
God, it's nauseating to look at. I dunno what my problem is.
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Well, at least now i know why my college art class grades were so poor.
God, it's nauseating to look at. I dunno what my problem is.
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Hmmm, might I ask what tools you used? Other than that I feel your problem may be your use of colour, from what I see here you use it moreso as a means of filling the image, whereas you should be using it to detail objects also.
Say for example, that bridge there at the bottom, or at least I think its a bridge, it seems very much like a block of colour, when you could use the colour to show its material, any detailing of the object etc.
sorry if I offended you I just felt like giving some input seeing as you asked and all I guess ^^;
Say for example, that bridge there at the bottom, or at least I think its a bridge, it seems very much like a block of colour, when you could use the colour to show its material, any detailing of the object etc.
sorry if I offended you I just felt like giving some input seeing as you asked and all I guess ^^;
this really isn't too bad! I'm not one to give tips on this sort of thing but if you're doing a sort of painting like this, it's a good idea to start with an undertone rather than working on a white canvas. Having a color back there instead of white will really pull it together.
Also maybe removing the sketch would help, once you have your shapes blocked in. Then sharpen the edges to pull it together!
Something you could do for this in particular is pay attention to like... reflect light? That house seems quite brightly lit, so you might have some hints of orange or yellow outside on the trees nearby and stuff. Also since the yellow is so bright, you might try darkening everything but the house to give it a more dramatic feel (just, you know, add a multiply layer over top and erase where you want the light).
SORRY IF YOU WEREN'T ASKING FOR CRIT
Also maybe removing the sketch would help, once you have your shapes blocked in. Then sharpen the edges to pull it together!
Something you could do for this in particular is pay attention to like... reflect light? That house seems quite brightly lit, so you might have some hints of orange or yellow outside on the trees nearby and stuff. Also since the yellow is so bright, you might try darkening everything but the house to give it a more dramatic feel (just, you know, add a multiply layer over top and erase where you want the light).
SORRY IF YOU WEREN'T ASKING FOR CRIT
How much time did you put into this pic, Beau? That would better help me to understand your predicament.
Your most recent Jester digital painting showed you have a lot of talent.
Remember that art isn't about talent. Like pretty much everything in life its about perception. How other people feel about what you produce.
Just look at famous artists such as Jackson Pollock. He slapped paint onto canvas without trying create realistic forms and was heralded for it during his lifetime.
You don't need a mind that acts like a camera and a hand like a digital printer that produces photo-realistic forms. You need a hook.
I think your style already achieves that. Its just that you're producing within furry subject matter and that has a far more limited audience.
Your most recent Jester digital painting showed you have a lot of talent.
Remember that art isn't about talent. Like pretty much everything in life its about perception. How other people feel about what you produce.
Just look at famous artists such as Jackson Pollock. He slapped paint onto canvas without trying create realistic forms and was heralded for it during his lifetime.
You don't need a mind that acts like a camera and a hand like a digital printer that produces photo-realistic forms. You need a hook.
I think your style already achieves that. Its just that you're producing within furry subject matter and that has a far more limited audience.
the palette lacks cohesion. Check this out -- it even uses a similar example to yours
http://cpresti.deviantart.com/art/U.....rial-290073389
http://cpresti.deviantart.com/art/U.....rial-290073389
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