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Tehe. My version of a chibi needs work. XD
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Housecat
Size 975 x 1280px
File Size 154.3 kB
I think the chibi's problem is that you gave it a normal head instead of a "super deformed" one. XD
You have a good sense of panel arrangement, my dear. You don't really need those directional arrows, because you've already made it fine and clear how to follow the action. A bit of ink would do some lovely things to these pages, you know. :3
Ooh! Wondering where this story be going. *goes to page three*
You have a good sense of panel arrangement, my dear. You don't really need those directional arrows, because you've already made it fine and clear how to follow the action. A bit of ink would do some lovely things to these pages, you know. :3
Ooh! Wondering where this story be going. *goes to page three*
You're right. My chibi head isn't exactly "chibi-fied" enough. I'm still trying to tweak it though, so we will see how that goes. XD
You really think so? I always thought my panels were a little weirdly arranged, but if you can follow them well, I must just being harsh on myself again. X_x
They could use some cleaning up, but for these comics, I never seem to ink them. I may later though, but for now I will just keep them in pencil until I really start to getting into the storyline and/or feel like they are to my liking enough for me want to immortalize them with ink. Silly, I know, but that is just how I am. XD
You really think so? I always thought my panels were a little weirdly arranged, but if you can follow them well, I must just being harsh on myself again. X_x
They could use some cleaning up, but for these comics, I never seem to ink them. I may later though, but for now I will just keep them in pencil until I really start to getting into the storyline and/or feel like they are to my liking enough for me want to immortalize them with ink. Silly, I know, but that is just how I am. XD
Haha, the problem with chibis is that you can't make them too detailed or they'll start to look creepy. *cough*clamp*cough*
Yep, the flow is clear as day. At least I think so. The best test is to give it to an old person and ask them what order to read the panels. XD
Ink does take a while I suppose. But it makes things nice and clear, and easier to see at a glance so that it catches more people's eyes when it pops up on the front page.
Yep, the flow is clear as day. At least I think so. The best test is to give it to an old person and ask them what order to read the panels. XD
Ink does take a while I suppose. But it makes things nice and clear, and easier to see at a glance so that it catches more people's eyes when it pops up on the front page.
Lol! Yeah. XD
I would love to try that actually. Too bad there aren't a lot of old people that I know that I would want to read my comics. >_<
I agree. Though I am not not doing it out of laziness. More like a "dissatisfactions with the rough draft". XD
As I keep tweaking it, I start to like it more and more though. X3
I would love to try that actually. Too bad there aren't a lot of old people that I know that I would want to read my comics. >_<
I agree. Though I am not not doing it out of laziness. More like a "dissatisfactions with the rough draft". XD
As I keep tweaking it, I start to like it more and more though. X3
Yay! I are inspiration to others!! *dances* X3
It's not that hard, really. All you need is a pencil, a ruler, an idea, and a little bit of time. Mix that all together and let it simmer for as long as you want it to and VALLA! You have a nice, cool comic for others to enjoy. ^_^
It's not that hard, really. All you need is a pencil, a ruler, an idea, and a little bit of time. Mix that all together and let it simmer for as long as you want it to and VALLA! You have a nice, cool comic for others to enjoy. ^_^
I always spend too long thinking about the story, though. I need to come up with an idea that doesn't keep me up all night pacing and thinking. XD Heck, maybe I'll doodle something today.
And thanks for the welcome shout. <3 Always nice to know I've been helpful and/or fun to talk to.
And thanks for the welcome shout. <3 Always nice to know I've been helpful and/or fun to talk to.
Lol! I know what you mean. Though for me it is easier to come up with a character concept and then build up the story around that as I go. That's why I am so uncertain about where my comics are going to go most of the time. XD
You're very welcome. You really have been of great help to me and have been so friendly about your critiques. Not to mention that you are entertaining and fun to talk to. I always enjoy people like you browsing around in my gallery. ^_^
You're very welcome. You really have been of great help to me and have been so friendly about your critiques. Not to mention that you are entertaining and fun to talk to. I always enjoy people like you browsing around in my gallery. ^_^
I feel guilty taking up so much space under your submissions, though. >.> Whoops. I'm just kind of a conversation whore, I guess.
Characters can certainly take you where you want to go. Although it's always a good idea to have at least an inkling of the ending you might do. (this advice comes from someone who's never taken it).
I always like to keep critiques friendly. It makes me feel nervous to do them in the first place because I feel like I have no right, or I don't have enough experience, or I've said too much.
Aww, yer makin me blush. :D
Characters can certainly take you where you want to go. Although it's always a good idea to have at least an inkling of the ending you might do. (this advice comes from someone who's never taken it).
I always like to keep critiques friendly. It makes me feel nervous to do them in the first place because I feel like I have no right, or I don't have enough experience, or I've said too much.
Aww, yer makin me blush. :D
Lol! Don't be. I don't mind. ^_^
Very true, but once I create a character, everything else just seems to click. It's really weird the way that happens. >.>
Nah. You have plenty of right. Critiques are always welcome on my art just as long as they are helpful and tasteful and you do both of those quite well. Thank you again. ^_^
Very true, but once I create a character, everything else just seems to click. It's really weird the way that happens. >.>
Nah. You have plenty of right. Critiques are always welcome on my art just as long as they are helpful and tasteful and you do both of those quite well. Thank you again. ^_^
Then onward in page stretching we go!
That used to be true for me. I'm not sure what happened. Maybe I'm rusty. D: Now I have to think like hell for anything to "happen" in my stories. I finally doodled a comic today, but only two panels complaining about all the sex I see on furaffinity. And I seem to have bothered some people. >.>
Cool, I'm helpful and tasteful! No problem at all. What's really nice is that you're not offended by my critique. :D Shows you're willing to grow. And, of course, that you're a decent person who doesn't yell at people for pointing out something's wrong. XD
That used to be true for me. I'm not sure what happened. Maybe I'm rusty. D: Now I have to think like hell for anything to "happen" in my stories. I finally doodled a comic today, but only two panels complaining about all the sex I see on furaffinity. And I seem to have bothered some people. >.>
Cool, I'm helpful and tasteful! No problem at all. What's really nice is that you're not offended by my critique. :D Shows you're willing to grow. And, of course, that you're a decent person who doesn't yell at people for pointing out something's wrong. XD
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