Very nice imagery!

I find the snapshot and the caption to be nice and captavating Your characters are drawn very simply but still keep their appeal.

What I would suggest you work on a bit is your faces and head shapes and technique. The proportions are great, just needs a little work in depth...

Even that said there is something captivating still about it. Keep up the good work :)

What's a fith pocket?

That would be a "fifth" pocket. If that is your clever way of pointing out my spelling error then I say to you SIGH....

However if you don't by chance know what a fifth pocket is its that little pocket on the right side of your jeans

originally designed to hold a pocket watch, it now usually holds money or drugs.