*frowns and squints at the words...

For what it is, it is nicely written, though I wasn't sure at all what it was about.

Watch the formatting... the computer changed your quotation marks to question marks and that hurt the eyes a bit.

*gives him a hug...

V.

Okay, I fixed the formatting and added a bit to the ending. Not sure whether that helps or not...

yessssss.... it helped a lot.... thank you

*gives him a hug for enduring her

V.

What an interesting concept. You are one of the most adept people at drawing readers directly into a universe with obvious statements instead of explaining everything in one long paragraph. I see that so often in fiction, it's so aggravating. Not even I am immune from that shortcut all the time.

You give a lot of information in a small space, just like the last prompt. And it's so effortless, it's easy to read and understand, and the reader has just the next question on their mind before it's answered by another almost-hidden clue, in a statement or quote.

Good job.

Thanks! Appreciate it. We'll see if the workshop likes it. :)

If anything, it's definitely you. I have two Tuesday prompts to catch up on, and dammit if I'm not going to catch up instead of throwing it away.

I was a bit lost at first, but then I realized she had some supernatural power. Then I learnt it had something to do with water and she touching it. Realized it was turning water to wine when church was mentioned. Very well written piece, the idea unfolded little by little, it was very entertaining read, although I was lost at first. Great short story.

Thanks! It's more a beginning than a story, though I never did do anything to finish it...