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This is one of those scenes that may not "make it" into the fanfic of awful i am writing.
However its such a scene that it would be a pity IF it did eventually get left out not to illustrate so view it as a "teaser" for what's to come.
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Airbrush braced herself, in moments she knew she'd be crushed beneath the breaching dam.
But nothing happened.
No bone rending pain, no crushing agony...
Nothing.
She was reluctant to open her eyes. "Was it quick? did i not feel anything? am I dead?" she pondered.
Before she was able to determine for herself a familiar voice broke her reverie.
"Would you mind getting out before I drop these? I can only hold them for so long."
She opened her eyes but her joy quickly turned to terror.
"Really Airbrush you look as if you've seen a ghost, did I give you any reason to think I was dead?"
"don't worry, I'll be fixing that soon enough!" Snarled Lightning.
However its such a scene that it would be a pity IF it did eventually get left out not to illustrate so view it as a "teaser" for what's to come.
_______________________________________
Airbrush braced herself, in moments she knew she'd be crushed beneath the breaching dam.
But nothing happened.
No bone rending pain, no crushing agony...
Nothing.
She was reluctant to open her eyes. "Was it quick? did i not feel anything? am I dead?" she pondered.
Before she was able to determine for herself a familiar voice broke her reverie.
"Would you mind getting out before I drop these? I can only hold them for so long."
She opened her eyes but her joy quickly turned to terror.
"Really Airbrush you look as if you've seen a ghost, did I give you any reason to think I was dead?"
"don't worry, I'll be fixing that soon enough!" Snarled Lightning.
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If he's quick enough, he might get a nice hoof shot to the jaw there. Or maybe the nose; noses tend to be sensitive.
At first, I was going to express my disbelief at Starscream being "heroic", but then... maybe "Ponification" alters one's POV a little. Besides, if they really are friends, then I don't doubt he'd do his best to help her.
Though Starscream would be a very scary friend to have. On the order of, "If you hurt my friend, the only reason you won't die quick is so I can hear you scream..."
At first, I was going to express my disbelief at Starscream being "heroic", but then... maybe "Ponification" alters one's POV a little. Besides, if they really are friends, then I don't doubt he'd do his best to help her.
Though Starscream would be a very scary friend to have. On the order of, "If you hurt my friend, the only reason you won't die quick is so I can hear you scream..."
I tend to be extreamly critical of any and all writing attempts as I realized around the age of 19 i was a better artist than a writer. And as a Writer, I sucked.Another reason Im bashing my fanfic of horrible is because:
1: it features a shameless self insert in the form of my pony Airbrush
2. Its a crossover between Transformers and MLP:FIM
3: Starscream as a pony... there really is nothing else that needs to be said there.
1: it features a shameless self insert in the form of my pony Airbrush
2. Its a crossover between Transformers and MLP:FIM
3: Starscream as a pony... there really is nothing else that needs to be said there.
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