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The Title Isn't the title this dosn't really have a title its a rough draft there are a bunch of stupid mistakes riddled throughout this but idk opinions would rock advice and that kind of stuff would kick ass. ont go all grammar nazi on me tho i WILL fix the mistakes and what not if i chose to finish or complete this or post it anywhere else.
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Okay.
I see the general direction this is travelling in,
and I had several questions had popped into my head by the time I finished.
Questions are good.
They mean that the brain craves information, that it wants more.
Overall Opinion: This early on in the story, it's hard to tell. I can already imagine several different directions it could go in.
I see the general direction this is travelling in,
and I had several questions had popped into my head by the time I finished.
Questions are good.
They mean that the brain craves information, that it wants more.
Overall Opinion: This early on in the story, it's hard to tell. I can already imagine several different directions it could go in.
For example: Is this going to focus only on the apocalypse involving the Four Horsemen, or will other End-of-Days scenarios be explored (like Ragnarock and other cultures' predicted apocalypses, maybe even something more sci-fi like zombies or aliens).
Also, will you expand on the discrepencies with the four horsemen (is one of the Horsemen Conquest instead of War, and are there only three horsemen as opposed to four)?
Also, will you expand on the discrepencies with the four horsemen (is one of the Horsemen Conquest instead of War, and are there only three horsemen as opposed to four)?
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