Lol Even I think my second sona is a jerk XD
great work

Well, for season 2, I wanted some characters to be similar, and some different. You said Gear was bipolar, and...well, maybe a bit exaggerated, but I figured after being eaten by a shark and so heavily abused in season 1, having him go insane with desired power would be hilarious.

indeed *sits on you*

Darn it! I can't read this right now! I will leave another comment once I have the chance to read!

Okay, I've read it now and I love it! The Drama is so ripe and juicy, it'll be fun when it bursts and gets its juices everywhere! I like how Team Galaxy has really come together since their early loss and are dominating, and I fear when that will come to an end. Hopefully it will last until the merger, but I have a feeling they're also only winning thanks to Volsar's machinations and if he gets caught Team Galaxy will probably end up in a tough spot. The other teams really seem like a mess: Gloria and Homicide definitely dropped the ball in their challenge, they could have won if those two had put their muscle toward the game instead of fighting; Team Avenger needs to reign in their few stallions, they seem pretty close to being a unit; Team Assassin... if Kara could learn to cooperate they'd be a force to be reckoned with, but all her fighting with Matthew is not doing the team any favors. Gear probably got himself in trouble with Kara, and I'm glad Mewth wasn't the one singled out for elimination, since he's just too much fun to see go away this early.

Now on to Chrissy: Loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it. Loved that she used her squashing abilities for the good of the team, that she's getting along with them and being an asset, etc. The only thing I wondered is why she wasn't dominating on the court, since at her size she ought to have been given the ball, walk down to their basket and drop it in, but thinking about it I guess the Kadabra opponents could be pretty quick and cause trouble for her, plus it seemed April knew what she was doing and Chrissy served better as a defensive player. I don't know, I don't watch or play much basketball.

Man, you sure know how to write these characters, I can't wait to read more. I MEAN IT!

You hit the nail right on the head with everything you just said, and I love that you did. Yes, that's the thing with Team Galaxy; despite Volsar's help, they really did learn a lot from their early loss and, unlike a lot of teams of history in game shows, they came together from it and didn't fall apart. Team Avenger is VERY close to being a strong team, but the fact remains that they only have two females and a lot of strong males, so that tends to upset the balance a bit. They're close, though. Team Thirteen...yes, they're a huge mess, but the fact is they haven't voted anyone off yet. Team Assassin is honestly all about Kara and Matthew, and Gear at this point. Gear is simply insane, and Kara was raised with a superiority complex that is going to be hard for anyone to tame. Also, Mewth was never in really any danger; he didn't deserve to go this soon indeed.

I'm super glad you enjoyed how I worked Chrissy. Yeah, logically, she would dominate on the court at her size. However, if you look at what I did with Spencer (who can also become a macro), it's not that easy. When you're THAT large, it's not only hard to hold a ball or a bat, but you can't really do the things you need to that a normal-sized person can. So, really, Chrissy being a defensive assist while April and Wolf-9 dominated was what was best, and she knew that.

I'm REALLY glad you loved it! Makes me happy to know you care.

I'm glad my skills with perception are good. That makes sense with Team Avenger, testosterone fueled male egos clashing would cause some problems most likely. I wonder how Gear will act from here, since he lost a member of his voting bloc, even if Kendra came back, they wouldn't be able to hold the majority of the votes.

Yeah, I figured that was the case. I couldn't see it working for baseball, but basketball seemed like it'd have been easier, but yeah, defense was much more suited for her. 'Sides, that's partly just me being ever-wanting to see her shine, even though I know she can't in every episode. I'm kind of lucky she's gotten as much screen time as she has, considering all the players you have to juggle.

You deserve it, these are really awesome and I'm always left wanting more.

Kendra is such a wildcard. The only reason she's there is really for Josh, whom she loves and idolizes. So, she can go with ANYONE. But, right now, Matthew treated her nicer than Gear, so we'll have to see. As for Team Avenger...well, the Brandon vs. Lucas feud isn't going away, but maybe Aaron, Cerin and Char can pull some magic and make the team come together! Or not.

Well, I loved our role-play together with Chrissy, and I really miss you, but I do love to use Chrissy when the need arises. It's not ALWAYS, but it does happen and I hope it at least pleases you. Love you!

I really just want to see the next elimination, those are always just so tense and dramatic, it makes for good watching.

I'm glad you get a kick out of using her, and I wish I had more time to spare, I often feel like I end up isolated from others because I end up being busy during the time other people are free. Oh I'm totally pleased. Love you too.

I should hurry and finish with reading all of season 1 of the vore tour, so that I can get to this.

I'm honored that you're that anxious! I sure hope it's worth it and that you enjoy it.

Nnf, always the best things pop up when I'm rushed. Guess I'll have to read it later and give a better comment.

Okay, Ricky! Love ya! Hope you enjoy it when you read it later~

Love the sports outfits. Didn't seem too rushed to me, but hey, that's showbiz.

Well, thank you very much, Nyterious. Love ya and thanks for your support!

*chuckles deviously*

That's all you're good for, I think. Chuckling deviously.

*Smirks* Very well crafted, Josh! I loved the ending, but I didn't much enjoy we lost, but that's how games go, win some, lose some!
Kara was definitely on the chopping block that night, but I have a feeling my sweet talkin did a good deed for her ;3.
Also...I have a good feelin' i'll be having a much easier time being seen as the leader of Team Assassin (Or atleast Co-Leaders with D-Claw and Kara).
*hugs close* Keep it up! Hope episode 4 is as awesome as this :3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

is that so *wags my grey tails at chu* ^3^
Yeah Gear is crazy, but very smart a dangerous combo :3

Yes, that is very much so ;3.
Gear might pose a problem later, but for right now, bullying others is the exact opposite of what this team needs, Kara, for example was saved by a gift from god after what she pulled, and Matt picked the most prime opportunity to get in good with the people of the team, and he plans on working with the others who feel pushed around. Do not get Matt wrong, he is definitely an opportunist, he learned that he must when he was in WPW, but he also knows building a friendship is also important. He actually cares for those he tries to build bonds with, although he may not outright show it in all situations, he would stand up for them when they needed it.

Honestly though, I hope for a Gear x Matt confrontation soon :3, I wanna see how that turns out.

(I love gears split personalities, his nice side might be out next one lol who knows)
*gear hugs with a smile and a wag* well let's see what Josh has in store for us next round, I agree we can't lose again X3
thanks fur the watchback :3

*thumbs up* No problem *hugs gear back*
Hopefully Kara will listen to me next time and THINK about the best course of action.

indeed *purrs* we may need another tactic ^w^

Don't ignore Elise's validity :P

It can be hard to ignore Elise- in any sense.

Well, you sadly cannot win them all. However, if you're a good player, you play like a phoenix. You rise from the ashes of your defeats until you can shine anew in all your victorious glory.

Kara, yeah, she was definitely on the chopping block. In the first episode, it was a complete stunner that no one was expecting. In episode 2, I'll admit it was somewhat obvious. This time around, while it might've been a tad obvious that Kara would simply not go this early, I wanted to create some drama on why she COULD go. But, alas, our friendly neighborhood Pokemon wrestler knew that the team had to stay strong and he did the right thing.

Right now, it's pretty obvious that Matthew is indeed running the show. Or trying to. But, he still has Kara to deal with (good deed or not), and there's the mixed personality of Taijey and D-Claw, not to mention the devious Alyssia scheming with Elise. It's quite a team, I'll say that much. Now, with Gear up in arms, it just makes it that much more fascinating!

I'm just glad you liked it, since I felt it sucked. At least the challenge part; all the other parts I knew were awesome.

Matthew, D-Claw/Taijey, Kara, Elise and Alyssia...if we could get ourselves working as a cohesive unit, we'd be a royal straight in this hand TDVA dealt us.

Nice. I give you a phoenix line, and you give me a poker line. Damn I love you.

Hehe. Wow look at that. Took a while but it's finally done. And it looks great! X3

Well...to elaborate on what is good I guess, Marisa seems to be trying to keep some dominance in the group. Great for her. I'm sure Colza and her will get along fine. *snickers to himself*

Anyway I thought the challenges, although rushed, played out pretty well for what it was. I mean, it was intense...especially the baseball and basketball challenges. Although...personally I do think Marisa could've been dug deeper but whatever you want to do with her is fine by me :3

Well, with Yoshi being the only other "girl" in the group, it should be easy for Marisa to do what she needs to. Since females USUALLY are a lot smarter than males.

Yeah, I know it could've been better, but I did try my best. Plus, since I just wanted it done, I thought it worked alright. Sorry about Marisa, but once again, I have 50 players to deal with. Not so easy, you know?

Yeah I can understand what you mean. Maybe the only two girls on the team should create an alliance. >:3

Well worth the wait ^^ had me wondering when Team Assassin would have their first ceremony. Cant wait to see how Episode 4 plays out!

I hope it plays out better for us :< and poor d-claw...

She'll get over it...I hope

:< *rubs her back and gives her a glass of milk*

So far, all the teams have had one except for Team Thirteen. So, does that mean they're losing for sure in the next episode? Or...not? Guess you'll have to find out! And, Taijey and D-Claw are so cute~

Been such a while. ^^
Also, loved how almost everything screwed up in the sports games. XD

Glad you found it funny! As always, nothing goes right when you want it to.

Hahahahah! XD
But I can't help feeling sorry for Team Thirteen. I hope they get a first victory sometime soon. X3

Don't count on it, but we can always hope! Thirteen is MY lucky number, but for them? Not so much.

I can see why you gave them that name. XD

Darn right! Mainly, it's my lucky number and it makes me happy, but the number usually symbolizes discord and unluckiness. So, yeah, it's a combination of both.

Huh. X3

Well I'm kinda amazed anyone managed to win this one. I kinda figured I'd be eaten for sure if my team lost, I suck at sports.. >.>

Kinda disappointing that another guy got voted off (especially a cute one...) those evil girls on the other teams kinda scare me >.<

Aw, you tried your best! Besides, it wasn't really your challenge; it was one for April and Wolf-9. Silenrea was utterly clueless for once, too, so anything can happen!

Well, in all fairness, I have more males than females (as always), and to make the plot move along properly, it kinda had to happen that way. Kara has a lot more to do; she wasn't going anywhere.

I've been thrown in the trash, had my tail tied up, didn't even get to participate in the challenge and got a spanking. Yup, this Lucario (aka me) sure had a rough time today ^^;;;

For only three episodes, you sure know how to character developize, or word like that. Hotheads Kara, Gloria and Matthew keep everyone on their toes because you love to hate them while nutjobs like me, Gear and Colza keep everyone groaning because you hate to love them. And I know it was that sneaky Abra who screwed with our uniforms and our challenges. I love the conflicts that everyone has, Brandon vs Lucas, Kara vs Matthew, Gloria vs the boys, Aaron vs the girls. It's such entertainment to see! As for Team Assassin losing, to be honest, I would've dropped Caleb instead of Silver, since Caleb has had 0 lines so far, but it's really up to you.

Keep working Josh, and DON'T YOU DARE MAKE ME WAIT AGAIN OR YOUR HEAD WILL BECOME FAMILIAR WITH THE INSIDE OF MY ASS

Damn right you did, and it's only going to get tougher for you! Lucas sure as hell ain't about to lighten up on you.

Character development is something all writers need to be good at, or else they're failures. And, yeah, it's nice to create a balance of different things all going on at once; those are called sub-plots. A lot of them don't make THAT big a deal, but are there to keep us entertained and amused. Like in Family Guy; there's always two things going on in each episode. One matters, the other doesn't. But, it's all about entertainment. Also, yeah, Caleb is honestly on the hot seat, but him going would've been too predictable. Besides, in Survivor, people last a long time who don't say anything! Sometimes, big names leave first and early (Volsar), and quiet fools leave much later.

Watch it, Brandon, or else I'll sic Lucas on you!

Eeeeeeh! Its finally herreeeeeeeee!!! Wooooo!! Although.... My role was....quite insignifigant...! XD DARN!!! Well im glad that atleast I didnt fall out of the dealie. Although its kinda un....nice that our team keeps losing all the time!! But as long as we dont come last, I suppose its more than awrite!!

Its been a good while since the last story dealie. So I was kinda lost on which team i belong to again and who are my team mates. I REMEMBER TWIGGY THO!! But yeah. As i said before, my roles were so scarce that I think ill pass on giving some indepth thoughts on how ya wrote Terra! Its good as usual. But since the roles were so short i didnt find anything to criticize for this part.

X3 But its really cool how i always find myself being all pumped up to see how Terra fares on the challenge at hand! Although most of our team concentration went on those two dumdums fighting.... BUT IT IS DRAMA VORE TOUR AFTERALL!! SO I SUPPOSE ITS ALL A PART OF THE DEAL!. There wouldnt be drama without uh.......dramatic.....people? Right?

So uh....Team assasin lost a player...! Sooo.... *counts with fingers* We are the last team who HASNT lost a member? DARN! Does that mean we will lose the next one too!? FUUUUU!!!!!

But uhm.... HMMMM AH! I like the mystery part! Like the virus and all dat! Its volsars fault right? VOLSAR RIGHT!? ITS HIM!? RIGHT!? Its kinda obvious with the sudden abras and kadabras and spoons all over the place!!

But yeah!! Drama and all dat! I love the writing style as its really like.... SURVIVORS! Although its very heavy to read for someone like me, as some of the american or english habits and terms are quite unknown to me. Especially those yank football terms! To me football means soccer. XD And ive never played yank football, or been too interested in it, so it was kinda hard for me to follow....and it looked like Terra was just the same!! XD As confused as me!! Well done on that part!! XD

Uh...nao what else....what else.... Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.................... Well im not sure what to say anymore...!!! Its unimaginably hard to pick the most important things in a 59 page lifestory! XD *is dazed* But i hope more will come soon! And I hope Ill finally get some screen time....or uh...text time!!

Yeah, I'm sorry about that, sweetie. In some episodes, some character need to take a backseat and let others shine. In other episodes, it's the opposite. A good writer has to know how to balance their characters out so they can all shine in their own ways. Also, if nothing else, Team Thirteen is the only team to not have lost any players yet!

Sorry it's been so long; just had a lot on my plate and crap. Glad that you mostly enjoyed it though! And, yeah, Terra's little Sparky Twiggy is still there! For her to cuddle~

Yup. Gloria and Homicide spent the entire time fighting with their egos and not paying any attention to the challenge itself. But, in all fairness, I seriously doubt Terra would've done that well in football anyway.

Very good. But, don't get scared just yet. Just because Team Thirteen hasn't lost one yet doesn't mean they'll lose next round. It doesn't work like that; it all depends on the luck of the draw and how good a team can fare in different areas/challenges.

Duh, of course it's him! But, while WE all know that, the characters in the story don't. Well, some are figuring it out, but it doesn't matter. Volsar is incredibly powerful, and he can do whatever the hell he wants WHENEVER he wants. He's almost a Mary Sue in a lot of ways, but that's just who he is.

I'm sorry it's hard for you to follow sometimes, but I have to split up the areas in ways that look nice and make sense. Plus, yeah, I know that football means soccer for some of you around the world not in the United States, but...well, I'm in the USA, so football is football!

It's only 45 pages. But, I'm guessing that when you downloaded it, it came out to be 59 for you. That happens sometimes. Sorry about that, dear. Still, thanks for reading! Love ya~

The wait was worth it joshy, a lovely episode. Most my review will be in the confessional, ill link it when done. Looking forward to the next installment ^..^

Thank you, Lucca and Lorraine or whoever you are. I'm super glad that you liked it!

Humourous, I like it <3 tho your image of me Josh, makes me chuckle

I try to describe all the characters in the way that I envision in my head. Aaron constantly gets pissed off at me for doing that, but I can't help it; a writer writes how he wants. So, I just hope you find joy in it this time. In season 1 you got upset a lot, so I'm glad you can at least laugh this time!

well so far you have written me as a retard

*hugs tightly* Aw, we all love you!

so I hear x3

As usual, I'll be commenting as I read it.

I love how Marisa solved that problem as well as the line that she used. *giggles and winces in sympathy too*

Gloria reminds me of a drill instructor with that little speech she gave I like that and I think she'll go far.

Zane didn't have the brightest of ideas there. Never joke around someone like Gloria like that. It'll get you beaten up every time.

Muirne is right there. Underestimating someone can be very dangerous.

Brittany and Muirne would make a cute couple in my opinion.

I have to admit that I agree with Sparky too.

Homicide's little speech has made things all the more interesting too. I'm eager to see which way things go.

Wolf-9's reaction to walking into the cabin: Hilareous.

I love the fact that Silenrea spent some time in Kali's belly too, since I love seeing Latias as prey.

I agree with Lorraine too. Statying bonded is indeed the way to win.

I agree with Matthew too.

I have a feeling that naughty stuff happened to D-Claw. *giggles out naughtily*

Silver is right too. Gear's idea is stupid. My prediction is that Gear will get voted off this episode.

That was a pretty good punch.I loved it.

Homicide needs tolearn better timing. *giggles*

What happened to Sakato: Ouch.

Hmmm, Gearmight be more devious and clever than I thought.

*blinks confusedly* Electricity bouncing off a metal trash can? Ooooookay.

The uniforms have Volsar written all over them.

I love Team Thirteen's uniforms. *giggles*

Sparky would make the best leader for Team Thirteen, and I think they're all beginnimng to realize that now.

Galen getting anal raped. Always fun.

It seems that Silenrea loves it in Kali's belly. I don't blame her for loving it in there either.

This is going to be interesting. I've read up to the elimination ceremony so far, but I haven't found out who will be eliminated yet. These are my thoughts: It doesn't look good for Silver. I think he'll be voted off.

Six votes for Silver and six for Kara. This is really exciting and a bit nervewracking, as it would be excellent to see a female get voted off now and eaten.

Darn. Silver got voted off. Gear's reaction was worth it I think though. *giggles* I do think it was a huge mistake to react that way though, as it tells Kara who the ringleader of the ones voting for her is. It'll likely get him into a world of pain.

*sighs in relief* At first, I thought it would be cv that would be done. I'm glad that it wasn't.

All in all, I really enjoyed it.

Great, you do that! And, just for fun and because I like to honor all the comments I get, I will reply to each one!

1. Marisa is a very smart girl with a very strong ass. Put those things together and you get one badass lady who doesn't take crap from anyone.
2. Gloria isn't really a BAD girl; she just goes too far in expressing her dominance and stuff.
3. Well, what did you expect? Zane is a cartoon hedgehog, and as such, he's not that bright in terms of being logical and understanding.
4. As we know too well from what happened with Muirne vs. Mune, indeed it's bad to underestimate someone.
5. They sure would make a cute couple! But, Muirne would probably rather use Brittany as a butt-plug than a real girlfriend.
6. See, the smaller players make good points, but sadly no one else really cares.
7. Homicide is a force to be reckoned with. He's lazy and very delusional, but he's still a mighty dragon.
8. Wolf-9 is basically like the solemn father type: he's caring and emotional, but isn't exactly the type to get behind crazy or perverted things.
9. It was honestly Silenrea's idea, and she and Kali made a confessional where that happened, so I had to honor it.
10. Lorraine is a very smart dragoness.
11. Matthew is a very sexy-butted, yet smart bird.
12. Poor, poor D-Claw. She has to get all the torture that Taijey doesn't, despite the fact they share the same body.
13. Sadly, while things look stupid, these things always happen in Survivor and Total Drama. A stupid idea and someone else always pays the price.
14. Punches are very useful for doing things, I'd say.
15. Homicide needs to learn a LOT of things, if you ask me.
16. Sakato is so obnoxiously annoying, but he's still funny for a running gag at this point.
17. Gear is a kitsune. Those beasts are indeed very smart. Very crazy, but smart.
18. Eh, Josh is used to electric attacks, so he probably put in special garbage cans by mistake and just forgot.
19. No, really? Yeah, Volsar is such a brat.
20. Team Thirteen didn't like them very much, though. Terra and Muirne were certainly intrigued.
21. Well, all of them EXCEPT the two with the loudest voices: Gloria and Homicide. I doubt they would listen to a tiny Pikachu.
22. Yep, Galen just never learns. She got raped by an octopus and the Loch Ness Monster last season, and now it's already starting in virtual reality.
23. Silenrea has a secret liking for being inside others' bellies and stuff. Kali is a nice Flygon, so I don't blame her.
24. Well, that's good. I didn't want to make it too obvious. Like, would it be Kara? Silver? Caleb? Gear? I wanted people to keep guessing.
25. Yep, six and six! The drama builds right before the final vote!
26. DUH! Gear is smart, but has a split personality and therefore allows his emotions to overtake his rational thinking a lot. But, yeah, Kara is going to murder him.
27. Nah, I wouldn't do cock vore. I HATE cock vore. But, just wanted to let it be known how Richter was standing before he did his anal vore.
28. I'm super glad that you did, too.

four sports in one challenge? Now that is interesting. Good going Josh. Ashame to see a fellow pokemon go, but you gotta do what you gotta do. I may have been on the sidelines behaving like a cheerleader, but I could have at least have a chance up at bat.

Thanks very much, Char! But, yeah, I'm sorry about Silver going, but it had to happen. For one, the cutie never even reads. For two, this time it at least makes sense. He was the only one on his team that walked on all fours, and he was a part of the wrong alliance.

Just finished reading it! I laughed, I raged, I saw things that made a lot of sense, and I've got a confessional to write.

Nice to know I got so many emotions and feelings out of you. Means I'm doing my job!

Um actually Cerin, it was Team Galaxy that met their quota, and they won the game too.

Thanks very much, you spunky kitty cat.

Team Galaxy did, but the other teams just don't have their focus and teamwork yet. With Silenrea, Wolf-9, April, and other strong-willed and nice characters on the team, it's no wonder that after Volsar was dispatched, they came together. The other teams still have many troublemakers, though, so that's going to be continuing to make them suffer.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10222632/

As I said there, I tried to balance the in-game drama 50/50 with the out-of-game spillover drama.

You are amazing, Lucas.

I figure I will respond to everything you left in comments as a whole in one, rather than start several comment chains.

>Team Avenger is VERY close to being a strong team, but the fact remains that they only have two females and a lot of strong males, so that tends to upset the balance a bit. They're close, though.

Now the question is whether that's a problem solved by victory, or a problem solved by shedding dead weight.


>Lucas sure as hell ain't about to lighten up on you.

Damn right - there are people with external drama I'm not going to lighten up on, what makes someone whose drama actually pertains to the game think I'm going to pull any punches?


>4. As we know too well from what happened with Muirne vs. Mune, indeed it's bad to underestimate someone.

How cute. You think that's over, or will be over any time soon. See the attitude in #5 below for a reason as to why.


>9. It was honestly Silenrea's idea, and she and Kali made a confessional where that happened, so I had to honor it.

While you were kind to honor it, and in this case there was no reason why it would have been difficult, you're in no way obligated to work in things out of people's confessionals, especially if they try to write a confessional that gives them some kind of significant leg up.


>I really love using April. She's not hogging all the attention like Lucas...

You knew what you were getting into when you allowed me to sign on. :p

Now if only that pageview glitch still worked so I could hammer like 950 more pageviews onto Psychic Barrage to get it back to being the #1 most viewed Mewtwo pic on all of FA... </attentionwhore> </literalwhore>



>Sports or not, Sagi has a brain, so that's what counts. Sports isn't ALL about muscle, after all.

Huge understatement.


As I said in messenger I am quite suprised there was no slight to me in the TDVA video that went up. My opposition is honorable if nothing else.

*hugs and squeezes the annoyed Mewtwo* No one here is truly against you, Lucas. No one here hates you, either. Muirne and Brandon don't hate you; you just think they do.

I know they don't.

You know my reasons for feeling as I do about both. Brandon is a rival where I have a species-based reason and that's it. Mewtwo goes in Smash 4 before you finish this story, my demeanor towards him immediately changes.

You also know my reasons for spillover drama with both the mouse and the panther. I feel there is unfinished business. If that business were ever to be finished in my eyes, then my demeanor towards at least one of them immediately changes (though I am not sure on the other.)

Another great episode, quite humorous heh, great job.

Thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed it.

Oh I definitely enjoyed it, now I just need to make Gloria's third confessional.

*April spins a basketball on her hoove.*

How's about a game Joshie~ ?

hehe thanks for doing another ep *April hugs you tight mushing you into her breasts.* mmmmph~
must have been the unicorn blood in her for the lucky ending... that and some help from a very big girl ;3
oh yeah April's birth day is coming on on April 1st and to celebrate I'm going to give out a link to my own vore game demo ^^

thats right her nick name is April fool XD that's how she got her name. though dont call her that or she will kick your ass.

even though it was sports game it still was fun to read and yeah another win for team galaxy!

oh yeah... *April gives wolf-9 a kiss and Anthony.* mah 2 handsome boys~

*blushes deeply* I don't think I could even score one basket against you and your lovely ass, April dear.

*snickers* That a fact? Wow, that's rather hilarious! I really love using April. She's not hogging all the attention like Lucas, Brandon, Matthew, Silenrea or Kara, but she's still likeable and awesome enough that anyone could root for her. Plus, country girls with southern accents and big butts are REALLY fun to use.

Wolf-9 and Anthony I'm sure will both REALLY appreciate that~

Great leadership my dear. Glad to see another strong player lifting our team up

*blushes softly* T-thanks~

^^ anytime, sugar~

*blushes brighter*

You know the drill love.

Yeah, I know. Didn't have time to do it in the morning, but I just sent them to you an hour or so ago. Make sure you comment HERE when you're done, since it's where I can see it easier~

hehe, i loved seeing homi being all sneaky and devious :P it made me chuckle. Hehe, it was great as always. "I’m a tough dragon with a very smooth brain and ass, but even I’m not invincible.” lol i loved this line as well, and homi arguing the entire time would probably happen as well, just because he's got a pretty big ego. hehe overall it was another great episode ^.=.^

Yeah, Homicide is seriously hilarious and fun to write for. Basically the wannabe villain who is very delusional and funny, not to mention loud and destructive and lazy. I'm glad you liked that line, to. Delusional characters usually say the funniest of lines.

Whoa, how long have you been working on it?

About 3 hours

You Sir, are Amazing ^^

Why thank you ^^

haha, awesome! such a thoughtful thing to do for the cast! Thank you!

Thanks, it's really my gift to everyone ^^

That is really cool, man!

Thanks ^^

Tis good my good man ;)

Thank you ^^

You are amazing, Brandon. You never cease to make me proud and honored to have you involved. You really are a great person~

Aww it's nothing

Still, thanks for doing one of these! Can't wait to see it given more views, and your next confessional.

Thank you ^^

ATTENTION ALL PLAYERS: I HAVE CREATED A THEME SONG FOR TDVA
PLEASE CHECK IT OUT HERE: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FwGt.....ature=youtu.be

I got flattened! WAaah! Didn't you like my song! WAAAH

Chris: *throws a heavy book at you* SHUT UP CAT! I'm Tryin to sleep!

I'm not a cat!"*gets hit in the face and falls*

You suck, Sakato. *face-sits him and farts straight into his nose* Bad boy!

mmmmph! X.X

Yaaaay!!! Im gonna start reading NOW! Im so excited! When I finish, you'll have my thoughts on it. :)

Great! Can't wait!

X3 Wow, this was a lovely episode! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'll have to go off and write a confessional, I think..

You go ahead if you want to, Kali dearest. Glad that you liked it!

I'll have to read this tomorrow or something, not the best day today.

That's alright, Nathan. I understand. You get those days a lot, I think.

It's no one's fault, I'll get to it in a while though. Sorry I can't read it right now.

I finally did good! Even though I'm a bit ashamed at how it happened, but then again I'm quite bad at sports.
Poor Brandon though, getting tossed in the garbage like that, and I still found the meals quite decent too.

Indeed you did, Sagi. On a team full of nutjobs and crazy people, not to mention psychotic females, Sagi and Sparky have to be the voices of reason! Sports or not, Sagi has a brain, so that's what counts. Sports isn't ALL about muscle, after all. And, yeah; Brandon is going to be getting that a lot. He's so over-the-top and wild.

I saw that coming. That was a nice long read. Though I kept getting interrupted while i was reading.
Great job and I'll will be waiting for more.

Sure, you can see EVERYTHING coming, you crazy Snivy. All the same, though, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Interrupted or not, if you got to the end and didn't just skim, you have my thanks. *hugs tightly, then sits on and gasses hard*

I can't see everything coming but Its quite easy to figure most things out. At least to someone that's a strategist. Even though I don't actually know what will happen in all of this The outcome Is sometimes easy or hard to figure out depending on everything.

I may not like sports games that much but I know a portly performance when I see it Soccer should have been recommended >_>;

*face-sits and gasses* Shush you.

1) Good thing Blaziken's can turn off their wrist fire, otherwise Matt's whole baricks might've blown up.

2) An unprodictable virus that screws with challenges, nice plot device set up :3 I'm sure that wont come up every episode like team rocket...or happen once and be writen off, which you tend to do alot more.

3) "ATTENTION DUELISTS! My hair is green and pointy. I just thought I should mention that" *Walks off and lets Brendon and Lucas duke it out*

4) Lol, I should point out that I am NOT SEXIST... I'm just gay, and dont really give a shit about women cause I dont need to ^^;

5) Aw, yoshi's not silly no more :(

6) *holds a Baby ruth between his teeth like a cigar and steps up to bat, creating a pizza paddle out of solidified energy to use as a bat*

7) Aw, but Aurion seems cool. He thinks a little too much of himself, but you can tell he's strong...he just needs some direction beaten into him >:3

8) "For the love of Aaron" :3 Daw~

9) Lol, s'good think that Gear dude's not on my team anymore *Makes his hand crackle with electricity* I'll be damned if I'd let some upstart pipsqueak with an inferiority complex try to control me >:3

10) Glad I got those Marimo cakes from Spore before I left. they really help with the sore butt *Growns and rubs his cheeks, before poping one of the green spongy treats into his mouth and leaping up onto a nearby roof. He stretched and took in a deep breath before noticing Matt on a different roof* Hmm? Oh, that's funny :3 I thought I was the only one who like to perch in high places to relax.

11) Well that episode was pretty good. took me FOREVER to read cause I kept getting distracted by other stuff. meh, blame my procrastinating ways. Anywho, I dunno want I wanns do for my confessional, so if someone wants to RP with me tomorrow, drop me a line ;)

1. Ain't that the truth.
2. Who knows? Guess we'll have to find out.
3. *punts Aaron into the next galaxy with a swift kick to his fine ass*
4. Yeah, I knew that.
5. Nope, he/she is not! He/she is instead very deceptive this time around!
6. You are insane, but we all still love you.
7. He needs SOMETHING beaten into him, that's for sure.
8. Yeah, aww!
9. Well, it's more like a split personality, and after everything that went on last season, it kinda messed him up a bit. But, yeah, good thing he's not with you!
10. You are so crazy! But, yeah, take care of that butt of yours; it'll be getting spanked a lot! Oh, and birds of a feather flock together!
11. Thanks very much, Aaron.

heh if gear and you were on the same team everyone would have been nommed by now lol

He introduced the virus in the beginning... It looked to me like Volsar had put it there from what was said. They are just noticing it now, at least more so than in episode two, and are now calling attention to it.

Sweet! I shall read it now!

That's a good catwings creature~ *pats on the head*

Okay, I've finished reading it and am now at my PC instead of my phone. (After the recent update, typing in my browser on the phone has become a royal pain... Have to keep tapping the text box in JUST the right place after every word, have to type each letter instead of using Swype, and have to constantly delete duplicated words if I don't tap JUST right, or it capitalizes EVERY word and doesn't put in spaces automatically anymore, and can't modify previous words anymore... Complete failure, if you ask me...) Here are my thoughts.

I think it was quite a good entry, and I have no complaints about characterization. I'm also thrilled at how involved I was in this episode! As for the outcome, things could have gone better. I would have also preferred the vote to have gone the other way, as I have, from the beginning, found the Kara character to be quite obnoxious and violent, and I kind of have an affinity for quadrupeds... As you can see, I've switched my form in most commissions I've been getting to my quad form. This is due partially to personal events and an addictive RP game I've been playing, but mostly because I feel like it. (Actually, my form in the game currently is nothing like this... For one, my black spot was removed early on in the game, and more recently, I'd given up my catwings form entirely only to get it back, but only the anthro version came back, replacing the created quad catwings form I built with the black spot added back in... But that will make little sense to anyone who doesn't know the game, so I'll only explain that if asked...) Forgive the rambling... But yes, I, as a reader, would have preferred the other outcome, but it does make for a good story. I'll bet Neko is wishing he could switch to Wolf-9's team right about now, though, with all the in fighting in Team Avenger. That, or he's trying to figure out a way to create peace in his own team. To that I say, "Good luck with that. Let me know how it works out for you." He's definitely getting pissed about the cheating the computer is doing, and I see he has noticed this and has pointed out the similarities between this time and the last to Lucas, who has vowed to investigate. That, and Josh's own knowledge of the tampering brought to his attention by a wonderful pony, should shape up to spell some interesting subplots to explore in the future. I must say, you've done a good job introducing that early and revealing it little by little ever since the first episode. Well done!

Thank you so very much for all your kind and considerate words, Neko! Love you!

You're welcome! Love you, too! Keep up the good work!

Oh, and now I want to see the image of Neko tied up and gagged while getting paddled... Probably a lot harder than I'd like to be spanked, but you know what they say about cats and spanking...

*Nine simply smiles in silence as he looks over his team*

Great work as ussual, myr friend. I didn't feel like the challange was too rushes, but I do have to say the outcome was a ldisappointingly predeturmined. Still, you did a pretty good job at making one of the less anticipated themes still fun and exciting. I would say the elimination was predetermined too, but just the sure amount of drama it caused and will lead into more then made up for that. In short, great work, and try not to make us wait too long for the next one ;3

And sorry if I don't get a confessional out for this or seem that entusiastic. I can explain in private, but know that I'm still just as happy to see thing continued

*hugs and kisses and sits on* Thank you very much for your usual mysterious and grateful words, David. Love you!

*hugs and kisses back* Hehe, I'll take that as a compliment. Love you too

Oh, and I must say...

Who's on first?

*Ducks*

You out-do yourself every episdoe! :D thank you so much for putting this up, i've been anxiously waiting for this forever! I love it!
Elise was awesome this episode! She was funny, sexy, cute, and gassy!
I loved how Kara told Elise and Murphy to gas Gear. that was great. :D
The trashcan scene was amazingly funny, and I just imagine Elise rolling on the floor laughing.
...I sorta just made a parallel.. O.o Volsair is sorta like.. the TDVAs own Phantom of the Opera! That makes me wonder what Team Assassin did to him to make him want to ruin their game..
I love the fact that Elise farts herself along the ice! Haha, that is an awesome image to picture! Its sexy smart thinking- and its hilarious!
Huh, thats funny- you know cats think every organism they encounter is another cat? I always thought that was neat.. and that was just brought up, intentionally or not, by Frost and her victims.
Also, its not that Elise enjoys the company of females more, persay.. but she definitely has a hatred for guy farts.. and I dont know how well she'd tolerate the males on her team.. aside from mabye Richter and possibly Mathew, they seem cool... and Meweth! hes so adorable, sure she uses him as a fart pillow sometimes, but she'd still try to be friends anyway... and.. The only other males I can think of on our team are people she's established she doesnt like (Murphy) or people that its implied she doesnt like (Silver, due to his diaper thing. Its gross to both me and her.) And people who seem dangerous to her, like Gear. I dont really know about Caleb, because.. well, I know next to nothing about him. XD
Loved the elimination! Seriously sexy, despite it being a male..

I am so seriously glad that you loved all of that! I honestly didn't think it was that great of an episode, but I'm really happy that you loved it and you listed all that stuff to prove it. I tried to give Elise a bit more time to play around this time, while showing off her "talents" and just being herself. Plus, as seen with other commentators, she's quite a good player and a force to be reckoned with later on.

You have seriously outdone yourself every episode! and ofcourse, I love stuff outside of Elise too. Don't worry, im not only in this for my character. I really liked Team Galaxy (atleast I think thats who won, im bad with names sometimes)'s victory. Loved how Chrissy used her big butt to put the ref outta commission. Though, I got a feeling if Matt didnt melt the arena, Elise mighta atleast been able to score one more goal.. Fricken fire chicken. Ah well, I actually love his character. XD He's.. sorta smart, freaking funny, and.. I'd like to think that if he were real I could probably get along with him.

Also, forgot to say, Loved how you pulled off Elise. :) and- here. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10234240/

It was good kitty, even if I didn't get a lot of it because sports and gothy coons don't mix so well... Okay, I didn't understand anything of the sports, but it was good. Needs more me though. And more muirne. And more me and muirne. *giggles* But I looooved it. The parts I understood anyway.

Well, glad you enjoyed most of it, my cute raccoon. And, yeah, more Muirne is definitely needed!

Oh crud! I missed this until now.

I'm going to be away for at least part of the weekend, but I'll read it as soon as I can!

Yeah, was wondering where you were! But, that's alright; whenever you get to it is fine. Hope you have a good weekend.

K. First off. Excellent job, love. I know you took your time with this one and it really shows. The comedy was better in this one I thought. I especially loved the part where Murphy killed the roach. Anyway at first I thought I'd be boring like in the last two but I loved how I got to pred. <3 Though I would've preferred to eat Kara because I love female prey. I feel like you did a better job balancing everyone in this one. I enjoyed Gloria and Homicide's rivalry, and of course I love Muirne.

On other notes I think you could put more emphasis on my character's size. Also on a related note, can you please change my ref in the discribtion from my old one to my current one?

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9400996/

Also, before I read this I was stressed out from work, but I feel much better now. <3 Love ya hun.

Well, glad you enjoyed it, for the most part, you picky brat.

Brat? You're cruisen to meet Silver Joshy boy.

Snrk. That was amusing.

Glad you thought so, dear.

My comment won't be very long.

Glad we won again. I'm upset about the whole thing with Silver, but he wasn't on my team so not much I can say about that. I have a lot to write about.

*hugs tightly* We ALL love that silly Houndoom. But, he never commented, so it's not right to keep him in. You know how it works. At least this time, unlike in season 1, everyone gets voted out fairly and at least has a fair amount of time to be shown before it happens.

Yeah, that is true.

Oh wow, nice to see the next episode up! Sorry I didn't comment any sooner, I've been away from home all week for my grandfathers funeral and haven't been able to check my messages. This was certainly nice to come back to.

It's sad to see Team Assassin finally lose some one, but it was bound to happen eventually, just glad it wasn't Aly. Nice to see her giving some well thought out input on the elimination, those were some valid points and I know it all boils down to who is more active than anything. I have some stuff I need to sort out still but I'll try and get more active myself, I know I don't do confessionals like the rest but I may give it a whirl, or might try doing a pic or something. I'll figure something out.

Any way, as always keep up the great work Joshy and I look forward to the next episode! *hugs before sitting on*

Sorry to hear what you've been going through, Grey. I hope you get in the right state of mind soon. Love you very much!

Yes, but everyone has to lose eventually, so it was bound to happen. And, yeah, Alyssia strikes me as someone very smart and leader-like, so it was only natural to put her in that position. If you were to do something, though, you know I'd be right there to look at it and gush over it!

*growls* You'll pay!

*looks around a bit.* Wooo, TACOS! I also like this episode. :3

Glad you do, James dear.

I'm sorry it took me so long to read this >~<;;)

Woo! Another victory for Team Galaxy! In this team the sky is anything but the limit! Created that motto mah self :3 these challenges just get harder and harder, and what's with the Volsar clones and outfit goofs, I demand answers! But least Kali was nice and full this episode...dat bulgey belly -w- *rubs it*

Well, better late than never, you goofy ant boy. And, glad you enjoyed it.

Ha, really glad you liked it!

So what is this?