Hehe, pretty nice, Wuffy...I have to say, Wolf would be a little more than intimidating, were I in Molly's shoes...that little exchange at the end almost feels like a betrayal of their romantic feelings and a gesture of affectionate from Molly. But maybe I'm being overly sensitive. I definitely enjoyed Molly's thoughts toward the beginning, when she finally considers the consequences to being with Wolf. A Wolf who's truly massive by now. *laughs*

As he said before, he's still a wolf, not a dog. I'm sure he would have had a much different reaction had Molly asked to feed him, or had Wolf had a say in the matter. There was a measure of 'pay back' there too, in the way he teased her by eating that first bite so tempting and arrousingly. After all, she HAD tormented him a bit as well, sitting that huge dessert just out of his reach. *grins more* Wuff's sure their affections haven't suffered as a result.

Vargr was glad to offer that little internal discussion Molly had. She is a rather practical lady after all. Despite the whirlwind nature of events, she seemed the type to consider such matters at one point or another.

And yes, Wolf is absolutely massive at this point! *big grin* And still more food to go! Even Wolf thought he would have popped by now, but he seems determined to struggle onward to even greater dimensions, regardless of the risk.

As he said before, he's still a wolf, not a dog. I'm sure he would have had a much different reaction had Molly asked to feed him, or had Wolf had a say in the matter. There was a measure of 'pay back' there too, in the way he teased her by eating that first bite so tempting and arrousingly. After all, she HAD tormented him a bit as well, sitting that huge dessert just out of his reach. *grins more* Wuff's sure their affections haven't suffered as a result.

Vargr was glad to offer that little internal discussion Molly had. She is a rather practical lady after all. Despite the whirlwind nature of events, she seemed the type to consider such matters at one point or another.

And yes, Wolf is absolutely massive at this point! *big grin* And still more food to go! Even Wolf thought he would have popped by now, but he seems determined to struggle onward to even greater dimensions, regardless of the risk.

I love it! Your detail continues to weave us a story that seems so fairytale like, but, at the same time, seems almost believable and legitimate. I personally enjoy the visualization of the food. I get hungry every time I read one of these chapters! GReat work, as always!

*snickers* Vargr gets the idea this wuffy is breaking diets all across the furdom!


Very happy to hear it's stil holding your interest!

XD Hunger doesn't break my diet, for my diet is to eat whatever I want as long as it contributes to a full belly afterwards x3 I'm envying Wolf, too. SO much food to eat!

*Laughs* Sounds like Vargr's kind of diet!

Wuff's Author is on a much more restrictive regimine, but he enjoys his avatar's appetite. *grins* And this wuff enjoys indulging his Author's voyeristic feeding/eating tendencies.

*chuckles*

not to what?

Not to trifle with a wolf, of course, of course!

Cheers,
OT

Good advice, that. *grins* Even a friendly wolf is never "tame".

And that's certainly not a trifling trifle!

Catching your errors, as always:

On page 3... "his ears when up and his tail started wagging." Oops. :P

(taking a break now - will comment again with more errors if I find them after I resume)

"“As for society–society can go hang. I can already get on its bad side by just being too successful with my recipes at the county fair, or finding a better beau than the next girl, or making too much money, or making too little. I am not going to live my life to satisfy ‘society’. ‘Society’ is going to have to be satisfied with me, as I am. Take it or leave it.“"

ROCK. THAT. SHIT. HOMIE. Seriously, sir--Molly has made me the happiest man alive at this moment. Hands DOWN.

Overall, great chapter! ^_^ Can't wait to read the rest!

*Big Grin* So very glad that passage stuck with you. It was one of this wuff's favorites as well, and VERY much in keeping with Vargr's outlook on life!

Though this started out to be a rather simple fable, a la Bros. Grimm, Molly quickly evolved into a character of depth and charm, and someone this wuffy was only too happy to keep writing about!

The whole interplace and developing friendship between Wolf and Molly seemed to spring from the characters themselves; this wuff hadn't really intended any of that during the original concept. However, if Vargr says so himself, it made this a FAR more enjoyable story, both to read as well as write.

Thank you very much for your kind comments, and here's hoping you continue to enjoy the rest of the story to come!