Hm, it's pretty nice although it sounds like the intro to something more x3

Junker: Hay thanks. I'm trying to think of ways to expand it with out repeating so dang much. I have yet to incorporate any other rhythms in my head with the song but I wanted to see if we were at lest on the right track. It seemed we were so thank you for the input. If you like this style I'll try and co-create more with Sailo. I personally try and visualize a scenario and make a song that goes accordingly. Any ideas for images or events that may help with my music creation?

Sorry, i'm not much help with inspiration for your music. I tend to have enough trouble putting my own feelings about something musical in text :P