A Big Bad Wolf Gets His Just Desserts (Part 14)
[[ This is part 14 of the series. It doesn't stand alone. Please read the prior parts first. ]]
The last two courses are finally on the table. Dessert and "after dinner coffee". The goal is nearly in reach, but poor Wolf is so full! Will he finish his enormous meal and win the bet? Wolf is determined to try. Victory or Bust!
(Story contains conversations between furry and human, long loving descriptions of various foods, growing affections, and gluttony - lots and lots of gluttony!)
The last two courses are finally on the table. Dessert and "after dinner coffee". The goal is nearly in reach, but poor Wolf is so full! Will he finish his enormous meal and win the bet? Wolf is determined to try. Victory or Bust!
(Story contains conversations between furry and human, long loving descriptions of various foods, growing affections, and gluttony - lots and lots of gluttony!)
Category Story / Inflation
Species Wolf
Size 78 x 120px
File Size 167.9 kB
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*chuckles* Good! Glad wuffy "caught" at least one. Had to keep his audience guessing at least a bit. Good to hear that segment was believable enough to go either way. *smiles* Glad you enjoyed this series so, and hope the little 'cookie' at the end (the epilog in the next chapter) is satisfying as well. Thanks for the Fav too!
Now, which of the multitude of ideas should wuffy work on next? *grins* Decisions, decisions! So many possibilities!
Now, which of the multitude of ideas should wuffy work on next? *grins* Decisions, decisions! So many possibilities!
Oh God! That was fantastic, I've never seen a cliffhanger like that on this site! Bravo! And STILL more to come? WHere do you come up with this stuff? It's fantastic! *Starts writing notes* I'm getting LOADS of new ideas for stories! However, with my luck, most of 'em will end up as busts. Still, fantastic! You've really put dignity back to fatfur stories, most of which are like: "One day, Mark the wolf wanted to get fat. So, he gained 50,000 pounds, his stomach was huge! THE END"
*grins* This wuff is honored to serve as a source of ideas and inspirations for you! Please, feel free to indulge in writing anything this story sparks.
Don't worry about being 'busts' - wuffy likes the explosive endings too! *giggles* Oh, you didn't quite mean it like that?
Seriously, wuffy understands your hesitation. Facing down that blank page, or that empty white screen for us digital types, can be a very daunting task! Some times you just have to "screw your courage to the sticking point", take pen (or keyboard) in hand, and hollar "CHARGE"! Even if the result isn't what you had hoped, it's still a step up over no result at all.
You can always file it away and come back to it one day. Perhaps the concepts will suddenly branch off into new dimensions when viewed again with fresh eyes. Perhaps they will inspire a whole new story related to the first. Or perhaps you'll find the places to tighten and edit and rewrite just enough, and end up with what you were striving for the first time.
No matter how it may turn out, one thing is certain, that empty page won't seem quite so fearsome the next time.
And thank you too for you remark about the story detail. Wuff shares your opinion of those types of stories. They're not limited to just weight gain or inflation either. They're rather like candy or a cartoon; a brief moment of entertainment and diversion.
That's not to say that candy and cartoons aren't fun, but sometimes this wuffy longs for something more 'nourishing' than candy, or more theatric than a cartoon. Wuff wants the 9 course meal, or the IMAX movie! *grins*
Keep writing, Glouton! Wuff looks forward to seeing what you come up with!
VARGR
Don't worry about being 'busts' - wuffy likes the explosive endings too! *giggles* Oh, you didn't quite mean it like that?
Seriously, wuffy understands your hesitation. Facing down that blank page, or that empty white screen for us digital types, can be a very daunting task! Some times you just have to "screw your courage to the sticking point", take pen (or keyboard) in hand, and hollar "CHARGE"! Even if the result isn't what you had hoped, it's still a step up over no result at all.
You can always file it away and come back to it one day. Perhaps the concepts will suddenly branch off into new dimensions when viewed again with fresh eyes. Perhaps they will inspire a whole new story related to the first. Or perhaps you'll find the places to tighten and edit and rewrite just enough, and end up with what you were striving for the first time.
No matter how it may turn out, one thing is certain, that empty page won't seem quite so fearsome the next time.
And thank you too for you remark about the story detail. Wuff shares your opinion of those types of stories. They're not limited to just weight gain or inflation either. They're rather like candy or a cartoon; a brief moment of entertainment and diversion.
That's not to say that candy and cartoons aren't fun, but sometimes this wuffy longs for something more 'nourishing' than candy, or more theatric than a cartoon. Wuff wants the 9 course meal, or the IMAX movie! *grins*
Keep writing, Glouton! Wuff looks forward to seeing what you come up with!
VARGR
More corrections! :3
(POSSIBLE SPOILERS!)
2nd Page, 1st Paragraph:
"More worryingly, his formerly deep, well-like bellybutton was had bulged upward until..." - 'was had'
3rd Page, 3rd Paragraph:
"My family and I enjoy a form call ‘Cappuccino’..." - 'call' instead of 'called'
4th Page, 2nd Paragraph:
"Molly nodded and resumed her perch on the end of the table, gently rubbing his bursting belly..." - I think you meant "near-bursting" O..O;
5th Page, 9th Paragraph:
"...and pieces of Wolf’s sturdy letter belt we flung all across the room..." - "letter" instead of "leather"
So eager to read Part 15 now! ;)
(POSSIBLE SPOILERS!)
2nd Page, 1st Paragraph:
"More worryingly, his formerly deep, well-like bellybutton was had bulged upward until..." - 'was had'
3rd Page, 3rd Paragraph:
"My family and I enjoy a form call ‘Cappuccino’..." - 'call' instead of 'called'
4th Page, 2nd Paragraph:
"Molly nodded and resumed her perch on the end of the table, gently rubbing his bursting belly..." - I think you meant "near-bursting" O..O;
5th Page, 9th Paragraph:
"...and pieces of Wolf’s sturdy letter belt we flung all across the room..." - "letter" instead of "leather"
So eager to read Part 15 now! ;)
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