Critique welcome always :3

Brian Trory Sheridan and his wifey Saraid Shu Fang. These are Lokian (Lokies) characters that will appear at the beginning of Water and Metal, the Dragon Pearl Saga... Which I am HIGHLY considering changing the name to: "Water and Metal Romance of the Dragon Pearl" Which doesn't mean Romance like love etc. Like as in Epic adventure Romance! Hmm.... What do you all think? For those who read the script, I would really love to know your opinions especially.

I will not be able to find time to work on the comic for a looooong time. Months in fact I think because there is just too much to do to prepare for it and also I want to get other promised art and commissions finished first But it felt REALLY Good to finish something digital and especially something concerning original characters. Now back to commissioned for me ;D I can't wait to submit more art ; w ; I must confess that a few months back I found some time to rework my script, but SHHH I don't like talking about that

Um... So about these Characters. Not much, as I don't want to spoil ;D But Saraid is Shane's Auntie :3 And Brian is a high social class businessman working for the Suibhne (Pronounced Siv-Nha) Macrobiotic Bio Luminary Research Co. He is 37 years old and Saraid is 24. Saraid is Helene's younger sister. Helene is married to Loga if you remember, which are Shane Poe's parents. So There ya have it! ;D

Brian Trory Sheridan and Saraid Shu Fang are characters of Water and Metal the Dragon Pearl Saga. Story and characters are original works and are copyright to me, Rheann K. Thow. Please do not alter or redistribute.