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Nice turnaround, and handled especially well -- going back and rereading it a second time, I like how things can be interpreted either way, yet without giving away the ending. >^_^<

I think I wrote that, straight through, while doing my editing bit, in around 15-20 minutes.

And yet I still had presence of mine to do that, apparently.

I pleased, yet kind of annoyed... apparently, according to some random music guy that my mom and sister dragged me along when the went to see him, I'm supposed to be an organizer. This apparently he interpreted also as being a writer, since writers are supposed to be organizers.

I think I'm agonizing a shade too much about this. Anyway, there's you're little random anectdote into my life.

*goes back to writing the monster that is Roommates 14*

Classic! I didn't think it was going to go like that and it's a nicely atmospheric read.
The formatting of quotation marks on FA is a nightmare - all your quotes appear like little diamonds. That doesn't take from your work, though.

Ha ha! Even FA's atrocious formatting cannot stop my Kansas City Shuffle!

I agree.. clasic... I really had no idea that the ending would be so cute. I was sort of waiting for 'rip and rend'.

*gives him a hug...

Good one P...

*looks at M... Wolfs are not always 'all' bad...

V.

<wide_evil_toothy_leer>

Everybody looks left, and you go right...

Nice ending

Thank you.

I agree, nice turnaround at the end, and well done overall.

*takes a bow* ^^

Funny. Amusing. I waited for the wolf to satiate his hunger, but you turned the story into totally different tracks. Quite hilarious little twist. Nice little story, I liked reading this.

Oh, but he did satiate his hunger...

His hunger for play! Anyway, glad you liked!