Its a good story!

thanks ^-^

Wow, that's really nice, wuffkitty... I really enjoyed reading it!

thanks ^_^;; i'm glad you enjoyed it.

Rah, lovely story! Really made me care for the characters in an interesting way. I was really rooting for Trance to say "I love you too" at the end (I absolutely love German Shepherds, especially fat ones at that!), so yeah, that ending made me very happy. =3

There were a couple of things I questioned...just that first section, a geek getting bullied by a jock, the muscled star quarterback at that, seemed very cliche. But the ending turned that on its head, and Kael wasn't the stereotypical dork getting bullied about his weight, so no big deal. I was also a little put off about Trance quitting the team just like that. I mean, obviously he would hit on the cheerleaders as a cover, but wouldn't football still be important to him with all the work he put into it?

I really like your descriptions. They're all very smooth and in the moment, making each graph easy to read without any awkward jumps or interruptions. Like I said, I really enjoyed the characters. You obviously thought about them a good bit, and they felt real. Nice work. =3

^_^ i'm glad you liked it. it took me awhile to figure out how i was gonna' have everything progress and i had actually been worried about some of the details you mentioned. *hugs tight* thanks sooooo much for commenting. (btw, Trance was fun to create. the story hadn't always been intended to end this way but i think it worked out nicely)

This was an amazing story!

The characters were very detailed and I beleive the detail about Trance and Kael's backround helped the reader romanticize and relate with them.Something I loved about Trance was how you made This already sexy sheppard into a Yummy Tubby Doggeh. ;) And also at the end I was glad to see He had the balls to tell his little fox the truth, most closeted jocks wouldn't. Everything fell into place. Very enjoyable read

Thank you for telling me about that you also have stories. I want to read more but its 3:34 AM reading more of your other stories is the highlight of my sunday. Goodnight
*HUGZ*

My english is kind of broken due to the fact that I'm tired
sorry

thanks hun ^_^ this was one of my first furry stories and i had a fun time writing it, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much. (No worries about the broken English. I know how it is when you're tired. hope you sleep/slept well, hun.)