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Finally i got this on here. it's been stuck on my laptop and i couldn't get it off. hope you enjoy. please leave comments
Category Story / Pokemon
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 45 kB
Its definatly got potential, but ther are quite a few mistakes in terms and seems to be headed in a mary-sue way but If you can add some discription, and give us some reasons WHY this kid is so special to the professor and such(and some reserch on pokemon and location names) and you'll have a good story
(doesn't mean to flame but you said comment....)
(doesn't mean to flame but you said comment....)
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