Written as a follow-up to "Hope in a City Without Modern Media."
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Malik: Osama Bin Laden stained my country's reputation. Good riddance!
Ali: Whoever thinks Bendraqi is related to Iraq is insulting me and my country. I'm not evil and neither is my country! The people terrorizing my people are! Glad they're gone!
Branimir/Brandon: I'm liberal but like the others in Kosovo, we like Leo.
Zarina: Same here but I'm from Kazakhstan.
Chuong: Glad I formed the UN1024s to bring the world together and clear up stereotypes to those who question us.
Ali: Whoever thinks Bendraqi is related to Iraq is insulting me and my country. I'm not evil and neither is my country! The people terrorizing my people are! Glad they're gone!
Branimir/Brandon: I'm liberal but like the others in Kosovo, we like Leo.
Zarina: Same here but I'm from Kazakhstan.
Chuong: Glad I formed the UN1024s to bring the world together and clear up stereotypes to those who question us.
Leo: We are just as grateful that your group became allies to ours. This overreaction probably won't last; television and technology will come back. I think they were just trying to humor me because I never live with it, but I have no use for it.
Super C: Exactly what I felt about Osama as well. It took 10 years, but we got him at last.
Super C: Exactly what I felt about Osama as well. It took 10 years, but we got him at last.
As I've eluded to before, a liberal or two within the G-52 ranks would do a better job of making it a more diversified team and improve their image to your audience. Especially if you could manage to get into their heads and allow for them to make solid liberal-based arguments, that would really show people that you have the ability to see both sides.
"...because furries in Wildcat City have a way stronger sense or right and wrong."
This is another example of something where you may consider changing the wording. The term "stronger" implies that the sense of right and wrong in others is weaker. Right and wrong is in the eye of the beholder and changes based on somebody's beliefs.
All in all however this particular piece of writing does seem less extreme than many of the others. I suspect that it's newer?
"...because furries in Wildcat City have a way stronger sense or right and wrong."
This is another example of something where you may consider changing the wording. The term "stronger" implies that the sense of right and wrong in others is weaker. Right and wrong is in the eye of the beholder and changes based on somebody's beliefs.
All in all however this particular piece of writing does seem less extreme than many of the others. I suspect that it's newer?
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