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jacendkm
jacendkm
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 1022px
File Size 219.9 kB
Very nice work, i can see from your gallery that your progressing quite a bit with every submission. Though if its ok for me to say and offer a few points of advice? Your upper and lower torso is very good very nice and if you keep going like that you will quickly progress to be a big name on here. Your leg work is good also though like most who are progressing and trying to get better be sure sure not to fall into repetitive traps on body parts e.g. The legs on a digigraded furry are not exactly the same in construction to a humans. On a digi their thighs are shorter as well as what you would think the shins are. If the thigh and lower leg is to long it will throw off body proportions of the character, experiment by shortening the things and shins by a little not quite but almost halfing them in length as you have to remember that the foot of the character is actually only the toes and pad not the shin as well, think of it as a human standing on tip toes.
That and I see your having a little trouble with the face and muzzle, don't worry what you have done here was 10000 times better than when I was starting off, my advice is only little seeing as your on the right track to mastering it. When drawing heads try placing the ears a little further back on the head, not much just a little and shift their size to make them fit well, that and the muzzle, experiment with rectangles more. Drawing the muzzle as a longer rectangle that is also wider going down as so when you draw the parting for the mouth you actually get a lower jaw and not all upper muzzle, then cap the end of the lower jaw with a chin, a small half circle is what I often use to build off off to add in features and bring out the jaw more.
Other than the very few little things I have long winded lol you are doing great, keep practicing, experimenting and you will go really far in producing outstanding pieces of art.
That and I see your having a little trouble with the face and muzzle, don't worry what you have done here was 10000 times better than when I was starting off, my advice is only little seeing as your on the right track to mastering it. When drawing heads try placing the ears a little further back on the head, not much just a little and shift their size to make them fit well, that and the muzzle, experiment with rectangles more. Drawing the muzzle as a longer rectangle that is also wider going down as so when you draw the parting for the mouth you actually get a lower jaw and not all upper muzzle, then cap the end of the lower jaw with a chin, a small half circle is what I often use to build off off to add in features and bring out the jaw more.
Other than the very few little things I have long winded lol you are doing great, keep practicing, experimenting and you will go really far in producing outstanding pieces of art.
Fasttrack! I feel honored having a comment from you let alone it being incredible advice! I just want to thank you for really looking into it! :3 I do tend to just freely draw a body without looking into the proportion. Kind of like guess-timating so to speak.xD and i will indeed experiment with the advice you gave me. digigraded legs are one of my favorite parts on a furry so i really want to perfect that hehe and i see exactly where you are coming from as far as improving the muzzles on my characters. I love to experiment with new things so ill definitely consider looking deeper into it!
your comment has motivated me I really appreciate the kind words and you taking the time to help me improve! Thanx again fasttrack and happy artsing!
your comment has motivated me I really appreciate the kind words and you taking the time to help me improve! Thanx again fasttrack and happy artsing!
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