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Here is the the text version of my MLP fanfic. 
Zero-Cross and me work Together on making the version of Path in the light. I hope you all enjoy it
all ponies are © of Hasbro
Zero-Cross and me work Together on making the version of Path in the light. I hope you all enjoy itall ponies are © of Hasbro
Category Story / Fantasy
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Size 50 x 50px
File Size 77.4 kB
I enjoyed the first chapter of this. It seems like it will be a grand adventure. There was a small typo in the first paragraph where you cut off the sentence in parethisis. It seems like this sentence wasn't even necessary as Fluttershy's absense is explained a few sentences later.
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