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Bringing back an oooold character.
Isaac was once one of the most renowned magic knights in the kingdom, until a massive, world altering accident he failed to stop trapped him in the form of a small, lapine-esque creature called a Lago. Suddenly, the people who regarded him with adoration now give him only pity, his fellow knights see him as dead weight, and rumors have begun to circulate that his metamorphosis was a punishment for the gods for an apparent sin he had committed.
With his honor on the line, Isaac sets out to find the true purpose of that fateful, cataclysmic event in the hopes of both finally righting it, and restoring his humanity and honor.
What he doesn't realize, is the true reason behind his change goes deeper than a chance alteration of his appearance...
Isaac was once one of the most renowned magic knights in the kingdom, until a massive, world altering accident he failed to stop trapped him in the form of a small, lapine-esque creature called a Lago. Suddenly, the people who regarded him with adoration now give him only pity, his fellow knights see him as dead weight, and rumors have begun to circulate that his metamorphosis was a punishment for the gods for an apparent sin he had committed.
With his honor on the line, Isaac sets out to find the true purpose of that fateful, cataclysmic event in the hopes of both finally righting it, and restoring his humanity and honor.
What he doesn't realize, is the true reason behind his change goes deeper than a chance alteration of his appearance...
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 1200 x 1200px
File Size 495.5 kB
Looks nice. :) I dig the lighting effect with that
floating symbols coming out from his palm.
At first, I thought he was holding the sword out
in front of him, but then I saw the way he was
holding it in his hand. When I hold a sword like
that, the blade is usually going behind me instead
of forward. It feels very awkward to me. I would
suggest either flipping the hand around the other
way, or re-position the sword to a more agreeable
angle.
Other than that, the outfit and the character's
design look good.
Oh! As for the shading, I would suggest adding
darker darks. Right now, the coloring looks a bit
flat with a cartoonish style (nothing wrong with
that!), but if you really want the lighting to pop,
I would bring in a wider range of darks and lights,
and some color of the light along the edges of
the character. That would really make him stand
out and show the bright light from his hand as
intense as I think it is.
floating symbols coming out from his palm.
At first, I thought he was holding the sword out
in front of him, but then I saw the way he was
holding it in his hand. When I hold a sword like
that, the blade is usually going behind me instead
of forward. It feels very awkward to me. I would
suggest either flipping the hand around the other
way, or re-position the sword to a more agreeable
angle.
Other than that, the outfit and the character's
design look good.
Oh! As for the shading, I would suggest adding
darker darks. Right now, the coloring looks a bit
flat with a cartoonish style (nothing wrong with
that!), but if you really want the lighting to pop,
I would bring in a wider range of darks and lights,
and some color of the light along the edges of
the character. That would really make him stand
out and show the bright light from his hand as
intense as I think it is.
Yeah. A lot of people have been saying the sword hand looks off. In hindsight, I'm not fully sure what I was going for with that at the time, beyond just 'looking kind of cool' but it's certainly a lesson learned for next time.
As for the shading, yeah I can see what you mean. Maybe I'll try and see if I can darken that up a little more and maybe resubmit it in the future. Shading has always been one of my weak points.
Thank you soo much for the critique! I really appreciate you taking time out for it. :D
As for the shading, yeah I can see what you mean. Maybe I'll try and see if I can darken that up a little more and maybe resubmit it in the future. Shading has always been one of my weak points.
Thank you soo much for the critique! I really appreciate you taking time out for it. :D
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