
I wrote this on a whim while reading a book on heaven, around April 19th I believe. It is unedited, and I'm leaving it that way. I could improve or polish it up, but I realized that would defeat the point. This is supposed to be a message written in haste. The author would not have time to edit it beyond correcting small typos, and even then only the ones they could catch right away. So, I intend to leave this as is, to help cement the feel of the writing. I may use this technique in future writings of this sort.
The only way I can think of to "improve" this short piece is to copy it over and over until it starts to show signs of data decay. Run it through a few more times, then it'd be good, as a garbled, painful to translate file found in some ancient ruin by star faring races in the future. I hope it at least gives that impression as it is.
You can leave me comments, but most critique will be ignored. Remember, I want this to feel unedited and rough, even if the author had some skill in writing. So don't feel bad if I don't listen to suggestions on how to make it work better.
The only way I can think of to "improve" this short piece is to copy it over and over until it starts to show signs of data decay. Run it through a few more times, then it'd be good, as a garbled, painful to translate file found in some ancient ruin by star faring races in the future. I hope it at least gives that impression as it is.
You can leave me comments, but most critique will be ignored. Remember, I want this to feel unedited and rough, even if the author had some skill in writing. So don't feel bad if I don't listen to suggestions on how to make it work better.
Category Story / Fantasy
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Somewhat. If you want to bug me about your commission though, please do so in explicit terms. I've had my fill of passive-aggressive stuff tonight, and I don't wish to deal with it.
And if you didn't mean to imply anything, I apologize. I'm just... not in the best of moods right now.
And if you didn't mean to imply anything, I apologize. I'm just... not in the best of moods right now.
Okay, sorry. If you read my journal from last night, ya know why I was touchy and paranoid. *sigh* Dealing with my mother leads to more stress than I can handle. Ended up crying into my bed this morning. Not fun, but at least I got it outta my system.
I have all I need saved to a flashdrive, so no worries. I can work on it when I make time for it.
I have all I need saved to a flashdrive, so no worries. I can work on it when I make time for it.
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