That's really good artwork. :D A+

Thanks CX

Very nice! And it doesnt need text. it would just take away from the story on this page.

Thank you C:> ~well, sound effect text. Since I made it, I know what's going on, but some people might be like I DON"T UNDERSTAND WTF IS HAPPEN so we'll see if people are like WHAT or not lol

Amazing style, I really like the animals designs.

Dat style! I love it

Thank you! CX

Where can this be read??

Updated the info with the website link C: Thanks CX

Beautiful colours, love the way you have divided everything as well

Thanks C:> I've been way into teal lately lol

Wonderful work!

Thanks C:>

This style is gorgeous. Those big, confident shapes are a pleasure to view!

I don't know if this is just me, but it took me several times before I followed the appropriate order and action. The way the borders of each frame point I seem to be directed out of sequence.

I got that too, it's kind of like the last frame is so dominant it pulls your eye right through the borders.

I'm still blown away though, I would sell my face to have this style. .-.

aww thanks C:> ~And yes, I learned a thing with this page lol Next time will be better, I just have to find a way to get it to read in the right order without adding arrows.

Thank you! ~Yeah, I was getting that after I started working. After I added that top left panel it threw everything out of wack. But oh well, I learned a thing and next time will be better C; (These horizontal formats are haaaaaard D:>>> )

Love that style! Ho-shit <33

Thanks XD

wow outstanding man! the new style is great ^^,

sorry to hear about PS :/ ...that sucks >.>

I think it was my graphics card crapping out again. It's just a bad version - its all fixed now so yay ~Thanks CX

my friend had the same problem a couple days ago x3 there is a graphic card curse going around xD *giggles*, ay least its fixed ^^, looking forward to more art~ and no prob x3

Damn, do I love this style, really good handling of shapes and contrasts to lead the eye around on a leash. So bold, so muscular! Love it. I do think that the problem with the panel progression mentioned by the others, is because of that full height, vertical gutter, splitting the page into a left and right half. As such, it almost looks like two pages. Maybe if you introduced some slight overlap between the panels to break that vertical, so that the progression has a stronger sense of left-right-left-right progression?

Thanks for the suggestion, some overlap would definitely at least start to fix the problem. It made sense until I took out the words and added that first panel lol. I should have replanned it before I kept going. Lesson learned lol And thanks C:\