This is another response to
Poetigress Thursday Prompt. I was stuck with uninteresting stereotypical images for two days after reading this one. It took a conversation with my good friend
Kathmandu to get a few new ideas bouncing around in my head. The resulting implosion is workable, but feels forced at the end to me.
Poetigress Thursday Prompt. I was stuck with uninteresting stereotypical images for two days after reading this one. It took a conversation with my good friend
Kathmandu to get a few new ideas bouncing around in my head. The resulting implosion is workable, but feels forced at the end to me.
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Heya Wirewolf *hugs*!
I really liked the concept behind this....purebloods and certain species being pressured to breed with only their kind. Very cool...something one doesn't think of too much I think in the fandom. I only see stories about how a guy can't be with a guy because of his family situation. Great insight!
I really liked the concept behind this....purebloods and certain species being pressured to breed with only their kind. Very cool...something one doesn't think of too much I think in the fandom. I only see stories about how a guy can't be with a guy because of his family situation. Great insight!
I dunno. The 'snowed in' line is all that really ties the story to the prompt. It was meant to be a delivery system for a silly pun and the next thing I knew I was on the stump preaching tolerance (in as gentle a manner as I could). So while it doesn't really hurt the story, without the prompt I think I would take that line out. It's cute but a bit misplaced, overall.
I like what you did with it, very well done. If you were going to publish this I'd flesh it out a bit more but perfect for a prompt. The ending doesn't seem forced to me and even if it is, it works.
And for the curious, the conversation went something like this;
Wirewolf: "I'm having a hard time even coming up with anything for the Thursday prompt. All I can come up with is stuff that has been done a million times before."
Kathmandu: "What is it? I haven't even looked in weeks."
Wirewolf: "Snowed in."
Kathmandu: "Hmmmm, well you could do like I did with 'fortune teller.' Try other meanings for 'snowed in'. First thing I thought of DeLorean."
Wirewolf: "DeLorean? What? How does that tie in with the prompt?"
Kathmandu: "You know, the car. Cocaine... snow. I dunno, it just popped into my head but you get the idea. You could go to The Urban Dictionary and look up other meanings. Do something unexpected if you don't wanna write the same ol' thing. I dunno, you could do a story about a guy surrounded by snow leopards or something similar..."
Wirewolf: (The International Space Station reported they could see the blinding light coming from the light bulb that lit up above Wirewolf's head at that moment. Being much closer, I still have a purple after image burned into my retinas that vaguely resembles Basil Rathbone) "Yeah, I could do... like a reunion!"
And thus a story was born.
And for the curious, the conversation went something like this;
Wirewolf: "I'm having a hard time even coming up with anything for the Thursday prompt. All I can come up with is stuff that has been done a million times before."
Kathmandu: "What is it? I haven't even looked in weeks."
Wirewolf: "Snowed in."
Kathmandu: "Hmmmm, well you could do like I did with 'fortune teller.' Try other meanings for 'snowed in'. First thing I thought of DeLorean."
Wirewolf: "DeLorean? What? How does that tie in with the prompt?"
Kathmandu: "You know, the car. Cocaine... snow. I dunno, it just popped into my head but you get the idea. You could go to The Urban Dictionary and look up other meanings. Do something unexpected if you don't wanna write the same ol' thing. I dunno, you could do a story about a guy surrounded by snow leopards or something similar..."
Wirewolf: (The International Space Station reported they could see the blinding light coming from the light bulb that lit up above Wirewolf's head at that moment. Being much closer, I still have a purple after image burned into my retinas that vaguely resembles Basil Rathbone) "Yeah, I could do... like a reunion!"
And thus a story was born.
I know you're right. But I think the challenge aspect of the prompts has always been (for me) to get as close to the target as possible. If I miss by a couple of inches, I tend to think 'hmm, maybe if they'd been hyenas instead of hippopotomuses'.
Is that how hippopotomuses is spelled? Hippopotomi? Hippopotomeese? *scratches noggin*
Is that how hippopotomuses is spelled? Hippopotomi? Hippopotomeese? *scratches noggin*
I suppose that's a possibility, but I don't know where else I could go with it. I might someday do a larger story based on this idea of speciesism among 'morphs but I don't know when or where I might place it.
Then again, now that I'm spending time working on Tux stories, that might be a good place for it, eventually.
*ponders*
Then again, now that I'm spending time working on Tux stories, that might be a good place for it, eventually.
*ponders*
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