Oh my God! The mouse on the windowsill is so freaking cute, omg. xD

And she looks gorgeous!

Ahaha thank you :3 I thought a little visitor might help her not be so lonely.

It's a really great little addition, and I've squee'd over it like four times now cause it's so cute. Haha. But there's something about this picture I really adore... like a feeling it gives off. I get that she's lonely, but also that she's hopeful/waiting from it. I really dig it!

Awh thank you.. That's so sweet of you. Also I'm glad you get that feeling, because that's sorta what I wanted. I have a boyfriend who lives very far away so I wanted to see if I could express that through it.

Now I'm more determined to actually do finish it! Thank you~

Nice job overall. There are some minor perspective errors in the background, but nothing that hangs up the eye horribly. Her expression is pleasant, and yes...The mouse is adorable.

Ah! Yay I was hoping someone would see perspective issues(that sounds strange but..), would you mind being a little picky in what specifically is noticeable(There are a few things like the bedpost etc that'll look better once they have depth, but as in distancing issues)?

Let's see if I can be more specific here...

Okay, kindasorta from left to right:

The headboard does not seem to be 'square' in perspective to the mattress, and the wall behind it looks like it should be slightly angled rather than flat on to the viewer.

The side of the mattress pressing against the table with the lamp seems to taper towards the viewer instead of away from the viewer. I believe the lines are actually parallel, but they ought to expand slightly.

Those are the big things I notice.

Also, the perspective on the window is very well done but there is no flattening of the flesh of her forearm near the elbow where she is resting her elbow on it to indicate 'contact'.

I hope that helps some. :)

thank of what ud wan to see out of the window the most or id go with a ocean side view.ur call

Finish, finish!

I greatly enjoy this so far hon. My boyfriend lives on the complete opposite side of the world, so I know what it's like to miss them due to distance. If you could do it, I think a street with a car or two driving in, none of them with her boyfriend in them like she wishes for.. I think that would work really well. :)