Wow, definitely some of the best fanfiction I've read concerning X-men. Nicely written; can't wait to see more.

thanks, this is something I slowly work on, usually one part a week. there should be a fair amount more to this story before it reaches it's comclusion.

on a side note, I'm happy finally find one person on FA who enjoyes my X-men story :)

Awwh, only one? T_T I would've thought there would be more.... Myeh, guess that's the comic book dork in me. x.x;

It's a hard thing to write about, especially considering how many critics you have to go through. :) Superb effort, though! I love it.

well, I'm sure there are others who look at this serie, but you are about the only one to comment on them, at least recently

I can't say that I'm overly surprised that all my human stories have receved minimal attention, this is a furry site after all.

Haha, I can see the irony, although more of my human works (drawings and such, I don't think I'm much of a writer) get the comments. xD

Guess it just depends as to people's preferences. :P

yeah. there are more people here interested in Visual art rather then writing.

also reading a story is often seen as require more work than looking a t a picture so many people don't bother reading anything

True that. But I'm an avid reader; stopped reading books for about a year, and then picked it right up again after so long. Ever heard of the Dragonriders of Pern series? Yeah. HUGE fan. I've only got two more books to go before I'll've read the whole series. ^^=

But anyways, a lot of times -- and this is coming from a born artist -- I enjoy reading MORE than art. Sometimes you need that respite away from your own world. What's to dream if you can't imagine an entire new world? :)

for me reading comes and goes. it's been about a year since I've read any novels, these days I read mainly online stuff.

I've heard of the dragon riders of Pern, but I've never read the books.

betrayed anguish is not the only one that like this! i am loving it. though you still have some editing issues. so i make the offer of maybe fixing them. I am hardly a professional editor but i could fix the most obvious ones
that way you could continue writing and not worry As much! :)

feel free to correct away :) I can always use more critiquing