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Forvet of his/he character Frank Holtzer the wolftaur
made it full-body because I liked to get some practice with these sorta types of bodies. and it too me ALOT of work to get it right =v= but I'm happy how it turned out, hehe
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commission for
Forvet of his/he character Frank Holtzer the wolftaurmade it full-body because I liked to get some practice with these sorta types of bodies. and it too me ALOT of work to get it right =v= but I'm happy how it turned out, hehe
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Category All / Muscle
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Size 1400 x 1400px
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Ok, here's some criticism.
Yes, you do need to work on the taur body a bit more. The forelegs feel a little bit off, as far as how the joints are positioned. That could had been done a bit better. (Actually, the elbow and knee joints could had been done better overall. It just feels a bit off as far as the positioning, as if the muscles are on the joint. No well-defined positioning of the elbow and knee joints).
Beyond the joint positioning, the forepaws seem to be more hand-like than feet-like. I'm not sure if this is on purpose or not.
Other than that, excellent work on the body shape. You have the basics of the taur body done rather well, as far as size and shape. Muscle position (outside of the legs) feels proper. Although, would there be a "six pack" on the lower half? That part I'm a little confused about.
Yes, you do need to work on the taur body a bit more. The forelegs feel a little bit off, as far as how the joints are positioned. That could had been done a bit better. (Actually, the elbow and knee joints could had been done better overall. It just feels a bit off as far as the positioning, as if the muscles are on the joint. No well-defined positioning of the elbow and knee joints).
Beyond the joint positioning, the forepaws seem to be more hand-like than feet-like. I'm not sure if this is on purpose or not.
Other than that, excellent work on the body shape. You have the basics of the taur body done rather well, as far as size and shape. Muscle position (outside of the legs) feels proper. Although, would there be a "six pack" on the lower half? That part I'm a little confused about.
well, news for you. this is my first time making one, and that's how my art style is, so I couldnt care less about your critism because I'll never do that sorta stuff. it's boooooring~ xD lol. just accept how other draws to their own style. I know you mean good, but remember, this is my first time xP
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