The long awaited sequel to Straight to the Point. If you haven't read the first part, find it here:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10606659/
Metek, a copper dragon pays the price for breaking the golden rule: never mess with a vixen's stuff.
Please comment, it helps keep me writing.
More trivia: ^^
Frumae is named after a late Roman Empire secret service, the frumentarii
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10606659/
Metek, a copper dragon pays the price for breaking the golden rule: never mess with a vixen's stuff.
Please comment, it helps keep me writing.
More trivia: ^^
Frumae is named after a late Roman Empire secret service, the frumentarii
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Western Dragon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 71.6 kB
Aww, was pretty good, but I thought the changing demonstration in front of the crowd would be after he used the diaper. XP
Poor draggie, being pushed to tears again in front of everyone! How were they aware of what he was doing in his diaper if it was surprisingly silent, and he was all wrapped up in his blankie, though?
Might there be any further continuation with this character and/or story? I've really enjoyed it so far! :3
Poor draggie, being pushed to tears again in front of everyone! How were they aware of what he was doing in his diaper if it was surprisingly silent, and he was all wrapped up in his blankie, though?
Might there be any further continuation with this character and/or story? I've really enjoyed it so far! :3
Thanks =D, if you could tell me exactly which parts you liked, and which parts you thought could be improved, I would be very grateful ^^. I originally intended for him to be changed after using the diaper, but it presented a conflict of plot.
Yes, I do feel some sympathy for this poor scaled cutie, though he'll learn to enjoy it, eventually. It was precisely because it was silent that they were able to hear what he was doing in his diaper. =P I chose their species, Fox, wolves, otter, raccoon, dragoness and owl specifically because all had particularly apt hearing.
Funny thing about me as a writer is that I work almost entirely on inspiration. For me, getting two bouts of inspiration on the same story in the same week was rare enough, somehow I managed to pull a third one off XD. The plan for the next part is that carma is going to come back to bite that bunny from part one. If you have any ideas to share, I'd be happy to hear them.
Yes, I do feel some sympathy for this poor scaled cutie, though he'll learn to enjoy it, eventually. It was precisely because it was silent that they were able to hear what he was doing in his diaper. =P I chose their species, Fox, wolves, otter, raccoon, dragoness and owl specifically because all had particularly apt hearing.
Funny thing about me as a writer is that I work almost entirely on inspiration. For me, getting two bouts of inspiration on the same story in the same week was rare enough, somehow I managed to pull a third one off XD. The plan for the next part is that carma is going to come back to bite that bunny from part one. If you have any ideas to share, I'd be happy to hear them.
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