I think it's obvious that the silly me was Reed realizing that the creature wouldn't let him out after he went through all the trouble of gulping reed down in the first place.

Oh? You seem so sure of yourself. But just how prepared to you think you'd be to defend your view if I were to start challenging it?

I don't know...it was the first thing I could think of, and it seemed right I mean it did sneak up on him and gulp him down all the way, though it is puzzling why it would leave his tail tip out.

Ah, there, now I've got you thinking about it. Thinking, that's what I wanted to see from that ending. ^^

Damn your writing is awesome! You've somehow managed to capture most if not all the sensations I have when I think of vore. Though I can't help but keep thinking who the predator is ^^; Nice job Reed! This has truly earned my fav!

I was going for a more sensational point of this, hence all of the closed eyes sensing imagery beforehand. And the vagueness of predator was an important part of the ambiguity of it all. It could be whoever or whatever you want it to be... or nothing all. Wrap you mind around that. :3

And thank you very much for all your kind comments, Frost. ^^

Silly you...it was all a dream.

The bigger creature is the mature side of you capturing the lighthearted, fancy-free self...that childish side who looks at the world with a sense of wonder. When those two come together by way of an inner meld like that, it forms the entire you...the you who gets to awaken and be the whole thing. You are the whole, and your mind tends to run away from that wholeness whenever it gets a free moment. We examine both of you without knowing who you really are, 'cause that's how you wanted it.

Deep

Yes, yes! Very nice! You have no idea how happy it's made me to know that someone actually looked so deeply into my work here. X3

And, yes, I did put alot to support this particular thesis into the text, subtle as it was, because I was just hoping someone -would- look so deeply. Very good, I'm mildly impressed. ^^

... Of course, there are shreds of evidence against it. Really, shreds of evidence for just about any view of the story exist. There's not too much that disproves this one, though, being that it was one of my personal favorites while writing this. I was just really going for a completely ambiguous story that could be interpreted in a number of different way depending on the reader, so I put some evidence for and against almost any theory you could think of. ^^;

Still, thank you so much for looking so carefully into my work. ^^

Any story is debatable in its true meaning. I figured that if the dream interpretation didn't work, that I might've been thinking too deep into it. However, I do respect that you've left it open as you have, not letting it be run by that interpretation alone, as much of a favorite one as it may have been. I enjoyed reading and thinking about my take on it...I was definitely able to immerse myself in those close-eyed sensory details. You write a pretty damn good story if I do say so myself.

Why, thank you kindly. :3

Very poetry. Kinda likes it. ^^

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. :3

well I have to say that was one really good story and as Draco said poetry like great work ^=^

And, in a similar reply to Draco's too, thank you for your kind words and I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it. ^^

you have very pretty head images |3

Why, thank you. :3

you really should write more... silly you 83

Mwahaha, soon you'll all be writing!

xD

The narration was nice, smooth. The main character (Mr. Igwulf :P ) had a good voice throughout the narration that rang with a token of familiarity (ish you!). I liked your little details and quirks. Yay for flopping around in the rain puddles and long grass.

The one thing I felt the handsome piece of writing lacked was tension. Once the igwulf discovered he was being eaten (whether physically or figuratively), it was a lot like he was standing on an observatory post 20 feet in the air with a pair of binoculars and a mic, narrating scene by scene John Madden-style (note to self: I should not, under any circumstances, try to be funny).

Anyway, what I mean is that there's a lot of little statements that shut down the action. "An odd thought occurred to me," and "Another interesting feeling happened right afterward," stuff like that. There's not much in the description of panic, or even child-like rebellion (if the child theme was what you were going for). Perhaps that's the nature of vore, I'm not sure.

Anyway, that aside, it's a nice piece. I'm very glad you gave writing a try. Now...*sits you at the computer and duct tapes your paws to the keyboard) another...write another. *grins*

Yeah, I don't know what happened with the observer view-point thing. I was trying my best to keep the established theme of odd thoughts. Maybe I just went over-board with it? Or maybe my real-life cynicism and observationalism bled over into my writing. Either way, I definitely see what you mean. ^^;

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it... But can't I please have my paws back...? ^^; *tries to lift them, but the keyboard comes up too.*

Pah, fine *untapes you* but only cause you're so nice. =3

I'm nice? When did this happen? ^^;

I really enjoyed this. I was impressed by the way you wrote about how you felt the world around you and also by the discription of the vore. I find that, in vore, discription is very important, would you not agree? The way you wrote it, about feeling the msucles move and the stomch curn really impressed me.
I feel that this has helped me to understand how to write vore better. ^_^
Also, by the last "silly me.", I belive it means that you found it silly thinking that it would spare you.
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