I didn't feel content with the last music submission of this song i posted earlier, so i went back and played through, added a different chord, and i don't think i really slipped up XD

it's done on an electric guitar without an amp (it's fried)

I hope everyone enjoys, and i want to ask an opinion.
do you think it would be good enough to submit to  furrymusicians? i really want an outside opinion, it would be appreciated greatly.

guitar and song is © me