Once more, the slim look takes away from the power you're trying to get the character to posses, but I like it still. The fetal position of transformation seems amazing and the face holds enough emotion to understand the character was in pain through transformation. The shadow idea is great, yet overused, but it kinda looks like the shadow's going, "Hey guize wuts goin on?!??!"

Felt the same way with the shadow. But it's hard to draw when some anti-art school kid sub. teacher is breathing down your neck.
ANYWAY *ahem*
Slim=him for now. Power will be gained in time ;)
Thank you darling <3