The first portion of an epilogue for the story inspired by a picture done by
thewielder.
(please note that he is no longer able to access FA, so click on the link on his page to see his stuff on SF).
Although I had originally planned on posting a single, concise epilogue of between 12-14 pages, I quickly realized that this was my final opportunity to show a side of the story I'd always kept secret-- a view of the world beyond Sidney's eyes.
So, in an attempt to close out the story in grand fashion and to give everyone a little more insight into the characters of Slave Trade, the epilogue will be divided into three sections, each focusing on two points of view. Part 1 focuses on Choel and Gaius, but also includes Willis, Balkum, and even a little bit of Sidney.
Marked general, although there is a little bit of cursing and some mature (though not adult) discussion.
thewielder.(please note that he is no longer able to access FA, so click on the link on his page to see his stuff on SF).
Although I had originally planned on posting a single, concise epilogue of between 12-14 pages, I quickly realized that this was my final opportunity to show a side of the story I'd always kept secret-- a view of the world beyond Sidney's eyes.
So, in an attempt to close out the story in grand fashion and to give everyone a little more insight into the characters of Slave Trade, the epilogue will be divided into three sections, each focusing on two points of view. Part 1 focuses on Choel and Gaius, but also includes Willis, Balkum, and even a little bit of Sidney.
Marked general, although there is a little bit of cursing and some mature (though not adult) discussion.
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LOL. Maybe someone can point that out as his full name at some point, just for fun.
In some chapters where he shows up, he is always "the Ocelot" or "Lord Talvin's Ocelot"; the name "Willis" is not used. E.g. his arena match with the black lion, his k.o. on Sidney-as-Bane, and helping Talvin-as-Bane save the day at Hector's estate post-revolt. This is definitely the first time I noticed him being anything other than a nameless bad ass.
That gave the name more punch when it was finally revealed. If I missed it in some chapter, somewhere, once, that is a good thing.
In some chapters where he shows up, he is always "the Ocelot" or "Lord Talvin's Ocelot"; the name "Willis" is not used. E.g. his arena match with the black lion, his k.o. on Sidney-as-Bane, and helping Talvin-as-Bane save the day at Hector's estate post-revolt. This is definitely the first time I noticed him being anything other than a nameless bad ass.
That gave the name more punch when it was finally revealed. If I missed it in some chapter, somewhere, once, that is a good thing.
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