And I said my drawing was old, this is from early 2005, the first full story that I've written, the filename shows that its been edited, its that I took a 4th chapter out that really didn't add anything and was kind of awkward, This is set in what became my Terran universe. It probably could stand to be revamped a little but I'll play with it later on. Anyway, please tell me what you thought of it as its the only finished story I have right now =^^=.
Sorry if its not quite in the right board, not 100% familure where stories like this would go *shrugs* happy reading