Fist comment!

lol, fist comment eh? so where's the punchline?


very interested in seeing how this continues Karno :)

You had the charm to put your characters in difficult but logical situation! I like it!

...no offense, but wasn't it kind of a given that there'd be patrols?

For what they thought was just going to be a rich man's estate, not really. Maybe some "rent-a-cops" to keep Mormons, Jehova Witnesses, and nosy reporters from bugging him while he's playing a round on his personal golf course. Remember, they just found out 5 minutes ago the place is a de facto military compound.

There's a range. Sadly he wasn't given a "birds eye view" to map that out. he was sent in cold, and sadly no major info leads to ugly scenario's like this but, a smart rat can play his cards right and bluff into the thick of the nest and see just how much damage he can do. So this could turn favorably

This is what we call a cliffhanger! Or maybe that's coming soon.

that a new one, your serounded by machine guns

Don't worry, bad guys are notoriously bad shots, Especially with machine guns. You basically have to have the bullet ALREADY in ya for them to hit you.