Very smooth sounding.

=) yush it is~

pretty :3

*sparkly eyes* Thank you!

the start makes me think of chrono cross. and for that this gets a fav :)

Hells yus! Chrono <3
Thanks!

scars across time was the first musical piece that actually made me like any type of music and not consider it just noise eheh

that was a really nice song :)

thank you mate~

Very beautiful, I love it!

Also, yay new music icon! XD *Feels head getting bigger*

haha, ish a gorgeous icon!

saw this as I was disabling my account until further notice. Will check this out when I use a computer.

Hope things turn out okay for you mate!

Nice start, though it could begin a bit more subtly. It continues on until drums join, then the piano introduces itself, and gradually progresses to start the song. The strings change a bit, and, then it goes smooth again. Could have changed the mood of the song entirely there, it would have been awesome. But meh. Then I'm to distracted typing *this sentence* to hear the end properly.

I think that this song was honestly, a bit bland. It could've progressed into something really action-packed and awesome! But if relaxing is the idea, it's pretty much perfect.
OwO some of these chords are a bit weird and random sounding yo but the overall feel is kinda <3333333333
Yes, some of the chord progressions were "a bit" off. Try making the notes follow a pattern, or scale. Best example I can give off the top of my head... Make notes join a "buddy system". Like (for slow, background instruments that aren't the lead) only use the notes "C,E,G" for 2 bars, then only use "D,F,A" for another 2 bars, then go back to the first, and so on, and then (for the leading instruments that steal the show) make a melody that goes with it, still only using the notes "C,E,G" for 1/2 and "D,F,A" for the other 1/2. You'll be surprised what it can do!
Anyway, all in all, it seemed somewhat repetitive. Repetition is best avoided, with the exception of choruses (a melody that comes back every now and then) to prevent a crowd of boredom.
And to finish on a positive note, new icon! Yay!

Next time you make a song, come on Google+ and you can see me crit it live.

Okays! And yush, was meant to be laid back! No action wanted for this piece! And ish intentially repetative; it's modled after Nobuo's older songs that were so~
He's like my idol~

kkk, k, k! kk.

OwO some of these chords are a bit weird and random sounding yo but the overall feel is kinda <3333333333

O w O
I found that by spacing chords more than just going down a note or two makes better chords =)

Okis <3

I've played Flyff recently. Got all the way to level 22 and traveled to Darkon for the first time. That place is as enegmatic as it comes.

On another note (no pun intended), this sounds remarkably similar to the tunes in Flyff. Like it came straight out of the game itself.

Thank you! I reached 98 recently (been grinding all day)!

OMG Flyff!!! Haha, that's why I was digging this piece so hard! Nice work, Yagami! It really does sound like it came straight from the game. :)

That's because I work for fly; I composed half the songs... of course I'm joking. O w O
Many thanks!

Roll the credits, please. This sounds like the end of an awesome movie/videogame, with an emotional ending.

Oh man! I should do an end game piece! I should remake gliding on open wings! yush. O w O

Yep. ^.^

Sounds good, man~ Very beautiful one.

Thank you. =)
Glad you enjoyed it~