Ho soltanto unaa critica da fare, che poi è + un commento.
MA è POSSIBILE CHE SHOUTA NON SI ACCORGA CHE GENTA è INNAMORATO PAZZO DI LUI?

Hahahahah XD è questo che rende la cosa divertente XDXDXDXD

Stai torturando quel povero ragazzo.

Amore e Dolore:le due cose che ci tengono vivi

Il dolore di solito fa l'effetto contrario.
Comunque hai più visto assassination classroom?

L'ho guardato....Kane....in quella scuola tu nn ci vai!!!!!!

Perché ? :( Dai che viene a farmi compagnia.
P.S. Che avevi scritto nel commento censurato?

Stessa cosa,solo che il mio iPad fa il ciglione -.-

Coglione,grr

not to sound mean or anything like that but, there are a few grammatical errors in your writting on a few pages. would you like people to tell you when these things happen? I'm not a native speaker, though. but it's important to write correctly for your fans (my-self included) to understand you better.

I have to' srry for my bad english,i hope you understand the scenery >~<

the story is understandable. I was just saying if you wouldn't mind if someone points these minor errors.
for example, in this page the only I can see is:
"you have already your kimono" --> "you already have your kimono(,don't you?)"
this was just the order of the adverb ALREADY cause it modifies the verb HAVE, so it goes before the verb.
and watch out to make it sound casual by taking off the auxiliary verbs at the begining of a question. I don't know when it's allowed to do that exactly, but my teacher also pointed me that a few times.
and I think I saw just a few tense errors too, but nothing big that makes people loose the plot of the story.

oh the tense error was in another page.