Awesome improvement :D

Thanks! Her red lines and critique really helped, she taught me a lot about anatomy!

Well good ^^ So you improved this much in like a day or two?

Yup! I did the first one two days ago..or so? The second one was about an hour ago.

Very very nice ^^

Thank you~

This is really awesome!! I can see how you're trying to show things are three-dimensional, and not just in the areas I redlined! I really like the seams in the jeans and the folds in the back of her shirt, and the hair is really working in terms of spatial relationships! ;3;

As you start to get the hang of this kind of thing, it's a lot of fun to use it as a base and add a little bit of detail as you go UwU It also helps to study other artists and see how they do it! I'M WAY PROUD OF U <3

Thank you so much! I started out using the redlining as a base, and just kept adding as I went. I didn't want to do an exact trace because...what would I learn from that? I had trouble with her left most cheek, it still isn't quite right to me. I'm pretty proud of the neck and curve in her back, but I redid the curve in her front from your redline, she just seemed a little too hour glassy for me, so I straightened that out. The spacing of the legs really helped, since I can never figure out proper knee to foot proportions, I had to redo the left leg like a million times before it looked right in my eyes. xD

Again, thank you SO much for the help! It was amazing. :3

I'm so happy it was useful!! <3

Yes! Hopefully we can work again like this in the future. Lord knows I'd love to have you critique all my work. XD