
Every once in a while, our routine lives get a curve thrown into them. We wrap ourselves in plain events and simple tasks, the little joys of living. It's at these times that it's most shaking to have something completely unexpected happen. It doesn't even have to be a relatively bed occurance, it just yanks us out of out drab every day lull. Often times it is the small quirks that get the largest reaction from us.
Comments and constructive critiscism very welcome.
Comments and constructive critiscism very welcome.
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Tiger
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 5.7 kB
You have a pretty solid style of first person. This is balanced out with your good description and flow. As a first chapter, their is not much characterization at the moment, but you have plenty of time to build that up. Could have some potential, continuing it after 2 years is up to you.
Haha, thank you for the critique. Honestly....I have totally forgotten where I was going with this story. Reading over it the errors make me....well fairly embarrassed. It obviously needed some decent proof reading before I posted it. However, the general premise of the story I like. Who knows, I might resurrect it yet. Thank you for your kind words.
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