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Another collaboration I have done this month, teaming up with Diman, and featuring our both main characters, Tokami and skifi. Full view is advised, but to give us feedback is even more recommended, hehe xD;;
I'm still amazed at Diman's art... he can draw in sooo many styles, and be so variegated, it's almost incredible. This is the third time we have worked together, and may be the best one in my opinion.... let's see what do you all think: Feed us with your opinions and constructive criticism, it's the main key to find out what's wrong if we want to do it better next time! ^_____^
Lineart © 2007
eldiman
Colorwork © 2008
skifi
Special thanks to
seely because he helped me to choose some colors
I'm still amazed at Diman's art... he can draw in sooo many styles, and be so variegated, it's almost incredible. This is the third time we have worked together, and may be the best one in my opinion.... let's see what do you all think: Feed us with your opinions and constructive criticism, it's the main key to find out what's wrong if we want to do it better next time! ^_____^
Lineart © 2007
eldiman Colorwork © 2008
skifiSpecial thanks to
seely because he helped me to choose some colors
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 707 x 1000px
File Size 482.1 kB
This picture has so many neat little details in it. The sunglasses in your pocket. The way the hats fit on the ears and horns, that's really cute. ^^ The texture work on the chaps and jeans looks really good too.
The only thing that's a bit distracting is the background. The fence they are sitting on looks fine, but the rock formations in the background look too photorealistic compared to the rest of the piece.
That is all, thanks for sharing this! ^^
The only thing that's a bit distracting is the background. The fence they are sitting on looks fine, but the rock formations in the background look too photorealistic compared to the rest of the piece.
That is all, thanks for sharing this! ^^
this is a pretty nice job, i applaud you both on your efforts
critique:
- your coloring is fantastic, its so bright and colorful it blends nicely with your background
- the photoshoped background looks pretty nice but the mesa's with the grass looks out of place
- the fence bothers me a little bit, the bottom horizontal post just sort of ends while the top continues on this makes me think that that fence just kind of stops right there. So then why would you have a fence if it wouldn't hold anything in? Consider clone stamping that piece of fence so it carries off the frame as well to imply that the fence keeps going.
- both of your postures are very cute but i personally think that Skifi's looks more natural where as Tokami's doesn't look like hes sitting on the fence at all he looks like he's holding himself up with his arms especially because his legs are hardly if at all touching the fence behind him. But theres not enough strain in his muscles or his facial expression to suggest that hes using only his arms to hold himself up while the "snapshot" was taken
- Skifi's hoof thats resting against the fence doesn't look natural doesn't look like he has it sitting on there solid, he looks off balance its too low on the post.
- the stark blue sky bothers me it clashes with the two of you because your so bright, maybe less sky or throw some clouds in there for a nice bit of texture
- both of your expressions are awesome can't stop looking at your faces, and the line art is nice and crisp, gotta love it
- looks like you missed a little spot where the post meets the ground behind Skifi, its a strange blue color looks like some left over sky or just maybe it was a rock that is painted funky
- fantastic job on the textures especially that bandanna its blowing my mind
I hope i was able to provide the constructive criticism you both were looking for, hope i wasn't too harsh or anything, you both did an awesome job i think your talents work well together great job again!
critique:
- your coloring is fantastic, its so bright and colorful it blends nicely with your background
- the photoshoped background looks pretty nice but the mesa's with the grass looks out of place
- the fence bothers me a little bit, the bottom horizontal post just sort of ends while the top continues on this makes me think that that fence just kind of stops right there. So then why would you have a fence if it wouldn't hold anything in? Consider clone stamping that piece of fence so it carries off the frame as well to imply that the fence keeps going.
- both of your postures are very cute but i personally think that Skifi's looks more natural where as Tokami's doesn't look like hes sitting on the fence at all he looks like he's holding himself up with his arms especially because his legs are hardly if at all touching the fence behind him. But theres not enough strain in his muscles or his facial expression to suggest that hes using only his arms to hold himself up while the "snapshot" was taken
- Skifi's hoof thats resting against the fence doesn't look natural doesn't look like he has it sitting on there solid, he looks off balance its too low on the post.
- the stark blue sky bothers me it clashes with the two of you because your so bright, maybe less sky or throw some clouds in there for a nice bit of texture
- both of your expressions are awesome can't stop looking at your faces, and the line art is nice and crisp, gotta love it
- looks like you missed a little spot where the post meets the ground behind Skifi, its a strange blue color looks like some left over sky or just maybe it was a rock that is painted funky
- fantastic job on the textures especially that bandanna its blowing my mind
I hope i was able to provide the constructive criticism you both were looking for, hope i wasn't too harsh or anything, you both did an awesome job i think your talents work well together great job again!
Being a rather HUGE fan of the cowboy look myself, I can especially appreciate this pic. I just love that slightly playful/cocky look on your face..and then you just have that cute, innocent face right next to you. What a nice combination ^^
The clothing and other accessories on you both looks fantastic too. The detail and coloring just look amazing :) It's a testament to both your talents that this was so well received.
The clothing and other accessories on you both looks fantastic too. The detail and coloring just look amazing :) It's a testament to both your talents that this was so well received.
I love drawings like this. Plain, simple, cute without being too flashy or pr0n-ish. It tells a fun story... maybe two good friends hanging out at a ranch or something of that nature. It just lets your imagination have fun with the scenario. I love Tokami+Skifi artwork, because it's cool to see "friends" pics. Wish I could draw XD I'd so love to draw artwork like this. I'd totally love to write a story based on this pic.
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