Looks really good. Much better than anything I can do, at least currently. Though the crystals/rock the dragon is on seems a bit off as they kinda blend together.

Still, very well done.

Thank you! I see what you mean. I will try to work out them clearer and more defined!
:) Thanks a lot for feedback!

Actually ... this looks pretty darn good so far. I'm impressed, seriously. :)

Wenn ich tatsächlich etwas zum Kritisieren suchen müsste, dann würde ich wohl die (vom Betrachter aus) rechte Vorderklaue bemängeln, da sie im Vergleich zur Linken etwas zu groß wirkt.
Ansonsten ... bin ich wirklich gespannt auf das fertige Bild - tolle Komposition und super Dynamik. :)

thank you!

ohje da hast du recht, die muss ich in jedem Fall weiter ausarbeiten :) Danke

oh thank you. Nice idea to mix more colors in. Thank you I will do that

An excellent opportunity to do that would be around the crystals. While everything in moonlight tends to take on a blue sort of tinge (at least with our moon), with crystals like that, the moonlight might get broken up into small spectra, like a prism projecting a rainbow on a wall.

hello..the one thing I would say would help would to define the hindfeet against the rock a little more slearly..it is a little hard to actually discern the feet from the crystal/rock
other than that looks very good

thanks a lot :) you are right! I will work on this

Good anatomy; the pose looks believable and the body position appears realistic

thank you

The left arm to me looks like it should be wrapped around the crystal like it's pulling it to hold on... other than that it looks fantastic!

coulkd you pls define more what you mean? I did not understand it so far. Sorry

Right now the right hand is on top of the crystal.. I was thinking if the hand was under the crystal and holding it would look more natural.

sorry I meant left hand ;.;

Very nice looking overall. Very striking and beautiful color pallet used.

The edge of the wing in front of the moon gets lost a little where it is in front of the brighter areas of the moon as opposed to the darker areas. I love the bright lines of the reflected moonlight used on the upper edge the wings, neck and tail, but it gets lost when in front of something just as bright.

I totally see what you mean. Thanks a lot!

Those icy wings are sweet.

thank you

I was also going to say that in some ways, the scale looks very small. The crystals almost seem that they're about the size of your finger, which would make the dragon very small in actuality. I'm sure that, as you add more details, the scale will become more clear. That's just the way it looks to me at the moment.

Also the edges of the wings almost look like torn, wet paper, which is a really fascinating idea to me. It makes me imagine that the dragon is a child's drawing come to life. Tearing itself from that page and flying around the child's room at night while they sleep...landing on a small piece of quartz the child keeps on the window sill in front of the moon....

Lovely piece! I can hardly wait to see it finished.

thank you :)
I noticed that problem ;/ itis a good idea to add more details in the BG. I also hope this will help.
Or may be a flying dragon womewhere far away or so.

Thanks a lot!

Make sure you keep your light sources in mind. If the main light (of the moon) is directly behind (and maybe a little above) the character, the character and rocks aren't going to be getting a lot of light from the front. As it is, they seem to be getting a lot of light from the upper left of the image, and I'm not sure where that light would be coming from.

White Dragon, is made well and is quite realistic, it defender terrain is quite fearsome. Very few beautiful pictures of the White Dragon, I would like that there were more. This beast reminds a person signs a very close and just intelligent beast