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PART 37!
I'm not happy with this one, too messy.
Anyway, I wouldn' mind a bit of encouragement around this time, I'm really feeling like this is not being watched anymore...
Dusk
I'm not happy with this one, too messy.
Anyway, I wouldn' mind a bit of encouragement around this time, I'm really feeling like this is not being watched anymore...
Dusk
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 526px
File Size 182.5 kB
Really? Awesome thanks ^^
I have my friend Nate to thank for his design though, we agreed on him being a ferret together. ^^ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/982535/
I have my friend Nate to thank for his design though, we agreed on him being a ferret together. ^^ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/982535/
It's good, especially the doctor's clothes this time. However, I will say you've kinda screwed Dusk with the dialogue. The doctor's put him in a terrible paradox.
I mean, think about it: since the doctor has read the book and told him it was a bestseller, now he HAS to write the book under the pressure of knowing that it not only must be bestseller material but that what he writes might be read by millions.
Plus, what if he DOESN'T write the book? Is that pretty much a guarentee that he won't die unless the book is written, since it's already been read in the future?
Dun dun DUUUUUUNNN!!!
I mean, think about it: since the doctor has read the book and told him it was a bestseller, now he HAS to write the book under the pressure of knowing that it not only must be bestseller material but that what he writes might be read by millions.
Plus, what if he DOESN'T write the book? Is that pretty much a guarentee that he won't die unless the book is written, since it's already been read in the future?
Dun dun DUUUUUUNNN!!!
AH BUT!
Time isn't just a straight line, its full of wibbly wobbly, timey stuff... So I could kill off Dusk, although it'd probably create either a huge paradox or an even bigger question mark as to if Dusk doesn't write the book, who does? Why? Ect...
Which is a very attractive prospect actually to me... Hmmm...
Besides, if someone told me Night Dragon was going to be popular in the future, It'd be a huge weight of my mind. Although maybe my strive to make my work successful is what will be its strongest point...
Anyway, we'll see...I think after this storyline I'll look for ore laughs rather than a plot fo a while, so I can touch up the messy side of the art.
Cheers for the comments dude ^^
Time isn't just a straight line, its full of wibbly wobbly, timey stuff... So I could kill off Dusk, although it'd probably create either a huge paradox or an even bigger question mark as to if Dusk doesn't write the book, who does? Why? Ect...
Which is a very attractive prospect actually to me... Hmmm...
Besides, if someone told me Night Dragon was going to be popular in the future, It'd be a huge weight of my mind. Although maybe my strive to make my work successful is what will be its strongest point...
Anyway, we'll see...I think after this storyline I'll look for ore laughs rather than a plot fo a while, so I can touch up the messy side of the art.
Cheers for the comments dude ^^
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