You have a pretty solid style and a world a brewing here. The environmental descriptions are very nice. Character description however is weak. Tie description to action and that should help reinforce your character traits. Also the difficulty of anthropomorphic characterization lies in the individual. We as writers tend to repeat wolf man over and over again. Flesh out the traits that distinguish the animal folk and they will come far more fully alive for their audience.

Keep up the good work.

Thank you! Yes, I did feel like I was using it too much. Something to look for in the edit. :D

Should I try making it a word document instead of a PDF? Try loading it again.

A good start. It seems that wolf fellow was rather keen on pushing the lad into becoming one of them without giving him much of a chance to think it over - will it prove for the better in the long run, or will it cause problems we have yet to gain an inkling of?

Well written, with only a couple of typos. It will be interesting to see where this one goes.

In my experience, it's better to write for yourself and let your audience be self-selecting, than to try to write to what you think people want to read. Some do well enough charging for commissions, but in the end it's in writing what you want to write that your talent as a writer really shines.

Also, I tend to favor .rtf myself, as it gives a writer at least a fair bit of formatting flexibility while minimizing dependence on software applications.

Thank you! There are reasons that he made a snap decision to change the boy.

I agree with helixthefallen, the characters need to be worked on. Ambrose seems to trust the werewolf too fast, and the werewolf's actions in biting him seem to come out of no where.
Other than that some typo's need to be addressed. Good start though.

Thanks for the feedback. :D He does seem a bit too trusting, yes. and as for his reasons behind biting him... That's to be addressed in the future.

Typos and editing will come post-NaNoWriMo

Thank you! I really appreciate that.