Ooh... I see some rivalry building up between Ammon and Ruze. :3 I like it. Very charming comic style, as usual!

Dang, that is one powerful cannon. But yea, Can definetly see our favorite General being riled up by that comment. Wonder how he will respond

Could you link the pages together in the description?

Sorry about that. I only had time to throw the page up before going to work. I'll get right on it.

i'm officially team Ammon now

sorry Ruze, but eye-patches rule :-P

I am not making Team Ruze/Team Ammon a marketing strategy.

whatever, but Ammon's awesome XD

i wonder who'd bottom... Ammon or Ruze? hm... well i'd lie if i said that i wouldn't love seeing Ammon being bend over by Ruze... :P

what a cute king, wait will the two knights from the first comic return?

They will be around. They just aren't important right now.

the king looks cute and innocent :> my type of bottom :#

The king is supposed to be sort of a young at heart guy. A "not as seasoned, but he's still learning" chap.

I really like the positive aura the king has, he just seems really sweet and kind. A good balance in personality compared to the other two grumpy generals, must come with the job.

You don't win your support from the masses by being a Negative Nancy. He also has some good heads to keep things in line. That always helps too.

king has a cute face hahaha XD

Ah yes, Ammon has yellow eyes! You might want to add a view of his other eye in his character sheet (I've been wondering what his working eye looks like!)

You still have my interest in your work from your character designs and style, especially from the last comic and I'm just DYING to see the rest of this comic and more in the future! I'm quite interested in the sexual (M/M) as well as non-sexual aspects of your characters (their stories, relationships with one another, etc.)

The polygon-styled panels is an interesting approach, but it may require arrows or some way to follow through the right panels to keep from confusing anyone who are used to reading only horizontal and vertical comic panels. Or you can just move those panels to the left side of the final panel to keep the consistent "read from left-to-right" approach.

Also you spelled "preform".

Keep up the good work!

Wow. Thanks for catching that spelling flub. Two pages in a row. That's not good. I gotta work on that.

Another comic that's rule34 that he's working on the side is straight. This comic is gay (not in the derogatory sense!!)

What he said.

A snide remark to the General? This will not end well for Ammon.

Nice! Though I can t help but look at the cannon's design...

"Preform"?

FIRE AT WILL!!! . . . poor will . . . .

this one was bad >,<

eh . . . made me laugh