o.O Holy cow this is old. I remember showing it to a friend in english class that had been reading my poetry since grade school and him refusing to finish reading because it was too 'dark'. Please don't be cruel - I was 14! It's posted exactly as it was written then because I've been threatened with losing my curls if I change it. *pouts*
Category Poetry / Human
Species Wolf
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 1.4 kB
I never saw this one as dark either. Truly, the ones I consider really dark will never be posted here such as Broken Prayer. Those will stay very much tucked away in a safe and unviewed place. I like this poem rather alot, especially for having written it nearly ten years ago. It just has -amateur- stamped on it. *chuckles.*
I agree with
haelkentrellek. This is not dark. It is full of soul and romance. Granted, it comes from a deep part of your soul, but depth does not always infer darkness. It moves me.
haelkentrellek. This is not dark. It is full of soul and romance. Granted, it comes from a deep part of your soul, but depth does not always infer darkness. It moves me.
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