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Behold! After several months of writing, re-writing, drawing, and head-banging, I've finally decided to post the first part of my story! Many of you may notice that it's a rewrite of the first version that I posted months ago. Only difference? It's way more planned out and (in my opinion) a lot more fun.
Well, I hope you enjoyed the first chapter of this (somewhat perverted) tale. If you could, leave a comment and tell me what you think.
All characters are © of Onyx Azor
Well, I hope you enjoyed the first chapter of this (somewhat perverted) tale. If you could, leave a comment and tell me what you think.
All characters are © of Onyx Azor
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 113 x 120px
File Size 284.4 kB
Great to finally see this coming out again. I see you've made some extensive changes. I'm looking forward to seeing how that affects the story.
I've gotta say, though, that while it looks like your writing style may have improved a bit, I prefer the encounter with the professor the way you originally had it. The girls were fun, though.
I've gotta say, though, that while it looks like your writing style may have improved a bit, I prefer the encounter with the professor the way you originally had it. The girls were fun, though.
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